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cordeliafrey78
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I'm partway through and I have to say I'm impressed. I expected this would be another shitty porn game with gross shit but this game is pretty okay. You have a real talent for writing and I enjoy what you're leading up to. However. I do have one criticism, and that is Benjamin. I'm not accusing you of anything but at the very least it's really suspicious that the first (and so far only) black character is a violent rapist. look, just change his skin color and add a black character somewhere, add a black char before that point and keep him, or even just don't include anybody but as it is, it looks bad. I'm hoping it was just negligence, and this isn't a character judgement on you. good luck making your game pal