I'm partway through and I have to say I'm impressed. I expected this would be another shitty porn game with gross shit but this game is pretty okay. You have a real talent for writing and I enjoy what you're leading up to. However. I do have one criticism, and that is Benjamin. I'm not accusing you of anything but at the very least it's really suspicious that the first (and so far only) black character is a violent rapist. look, just change his skin color and add a black character somewhere, add a black char before that point and keep him, or even just don't include anybody but as it is, it looks bad. I'm hoping it was just negligence, and this isn't a character judgement on you. good luck making your game pal
I'd argue that his buddy Axel falls within the same vein. However, your point about Ben being the only black character is a good one. I think that a good solution for those concerned about the offense would probably be to diversify the ethnic makeup of the morally better characters. For example, I wouldn't have anything against one or more of the girls being black. Or Chang. Or even Bumbledore.
If we want to go down that road, we could argue that the blonde haired, blue-eyed guy being the villain is "wacist" as well. Or we could knock it off with the superficial bullshit of defining people solely by their skin color. Axel and Benjamin are assholes, plain and simple. There are assholes from all walks of life, just as there are good people.
"I have a dream of a world where a man is judged not by the color of his skin, but by the content of his character." - Martin Luther King, Jr.