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I really liked that this wasn't like a big battle or at all a setting I would have expected. It was just a well done original take on the prompt

This was really fun and evocative read. You did a great job of painting a picture with in the  limited word count. My only critic is I wish the two characters had met and interacted sooner. I think what I mean is I would like to read the next 1000 words of your story.