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Your English is fantastic!  It's mostly minor things.

Just gonna list some here so that other people can chime in if they think I'm wrong:

- "Choose the character" might be considered a bit awkward; "Choose your character" is standard (but "the character" has a certain detached charm...so I'd argue you should leave it as is).  Other options are "Choose character" or "Character select/ion".  (edit:  I noticed it says "Choose the location", so you can probably ignore me)

- "When you are about to die, you lose X percentage of skin finding instead" or "Lose X percentage of skin finding instead of dying" is more natural than the current version.

- I think there was something that said "Your aim have greatly improved", when it should be "has greatly improved".

I'll let you know if I find any more.

don't listen to him, the binary stays!! maybe make a character who can read all the messages without needing a translator / a cheat setting once the game is beaten?

i really,  really love this game. awesome stuff. can't wait for the full release.

that said, there are a few errors with the grammar. i think i saw somewhere that english isn't your first language, so i understand. but did you want some feedback on the errors, or someone to proofread it? sorry if this has already been mentioned!!

keep it up dude!!

nice!