Wow, I'm honestly very impressed with how well all the assets work together. The character interactions are fluid and full of witty sarcastic banter.
Though I have tried to find the good ending. But from the options given, I couldn't find a pathway. Unless I haven't found the right pattern of choice, so I may be wrong
I love the down-to-earth vibe the art and music provide for the game's overall atmosphere. My main issue is that there doesn't seem to be a middle or end to this story. We are introduced to characters that we don't have the time to get attached to before it suddenly stops. I can see an interesting modern take on a dark fairytale.
The story was exciting and fun to read. The insight of the MC is dark but reasonable in his situation. A continuation sounds like an entertaining idea. The animated bit in the end is aborable~
The main thing I would suggest is at least one more read through of the dialogue for some slight grammar errors and a more consistent art style would be very beneficial.
idk if there is still something wrong with the browser version, but it'll glitch sometimes and you can't continue the story. The Bg music changes when it happens. Otherwise, the game plays really well. The only other bit of criticism I have is that some of the dialogue doesn't read well when you read it out loud. Aside from that, the art style is unique. The characters interact well with each other. With some polishing, I really hope your project does well in the future. Keep up the amazing work.
