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The writing is good enough that I wouldn't be ashamed if someone found this on my computer.  All of the characters are likeable and seem to feel genuine affection for each other. 

Would love to see this go pan-poly as fuck.

There are some sensitive topics covered, and there are dark moments, but they are handled with sensitivity and compassion. 

I obviously can't say whether or not it would be triggering, but the story asserts love and compassion as the way of moving through trauma.

NICE CATCH 😎

I do the same thing - I voice the characters in my head. I feel like they each have a distinct voice and I think that's due to the quality of they writing. The characters are very well rounded and will get you emotionally invested in this game. Once you're invested you're in for a ride. Even the sappy parts are philosophically rich and emotionally intelligent.

I agree, this one is exceptional.

Excellent writing. Excellent story. Seriously, very well written characters. They feel well-rounded and distinct, not the cardboard cut outs with cheezy dialogue you get in so many others. There's real humor and real heart. 

Also sex. Eventually. I'm hoping they stop holding back and go all out by the end of this thing, but I do appreciate the build up. There's no animation, but I honestly feel like it would be out of place.

It's a linear VN, but even if you shy away from that, it's worth giving a try. I'm not really into VN's, but this one is spectacular. Excellent soundtrack - I greatly appreciate the devs' taste here. Excellent track selection that really captures the right mood at each moment. There are some points where it begins to feel al little repetitive, so adding a few more tracks might be a good idea, but there aren't many places where I would swap tracks.

With the excellent plot and dialogue, well-rounded and fleshed out characters,  the drama, the mystery, the slow build of sexual tension, the , and the (many forms of) humor all in one VN, this is not one to miss. Spans genres and does all of them well.  I don't know if this piece of sexy, wholesome, violent, dark, gorgeous art will ever get the recognition it deserves sadly.

Please support this dev! This is something special that needs to be finished.

Do these comments hit too close to home for you? You're defending this storyline quite fervently.

Not sure how your reply is relevant to my comment. There's nothing in this game I can't "handle." This is far from the only game with this plotline. It's always gross. Simple as that.

I don't know how you think the alternative to this is NTR.

There're quite a few games here that are a simple story of a groomer where the game justifies the grooming with some "horny girl" BS. It's the groomer fantasy played out: "We're consenting adults (now). She wants it." 

Catering to this particular market because it's what they're looking for is no excuse.

Funny that he pointed out a lot of well thought and valid objections and your response is "he's just hating."

Probably easier for you to do that than to actually read or understand them. Maybe if you did you could actually have something of substance to rebute them with rather than an emotional outburst.

Solid critique. The "these girls are like my daughters and I really want to fuck them" storyline is always creepy and cringe.

Thanks for the thorough review.