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I love how the guy is all "you got attacked by a hundred guys and one-shot KO'd them all but broke my furniture in the process and now I'm going to FORCE you to work it off". Umm how the fuck exactly do you plan to do that, genius? Did you SEE what just happened here? I'd say you're not exactly in a position to make demands."

A sexy vampire who melts over having her backdoor played with... oh I see this going some amazingly hot places in the next release!

As a storyteller myself, I'm quite impressed with this game. The characters, the setting, the plot, the art, all of it is just compelling as hell and really makes the player invest in what's going on. None of the characters feel bland or cookie-cutter, all of their motivations and actions make sense, and the reluctant monster angle in particular is really strong as it sets up an unusual set of stakes where killing the enemy would be relatively easy but stopping them while keeping them alive is both difficult and clearly worthwhile.

The thing is that requires actually caring about the antagonists, and the story does an amazing job of making them sympathetic and worth caring for. Bad storytellers have trouble making the audience care even for the protagonists, and make even world ending threats boring, but this story makes a mere four lives at stake, two of them the ostensible villains of the tale, feel important and impactful. That is just plain good writing, and there is no substitute for it in any form of fiction.

I will definitely be recommending this to my friends who like the sexy supernatural modern genre, and I'll be honest if this was a streaming series it would probably make megabucks on Netflix or the like.

Keep up the great work!

That you'd be put to use as labor, because believe it or not most men aren't interested in other men's asses. On the other hand they're happy to make other men do work for them because pointing a gun and giving orders is a hell of a lot easier than doing shit themselves.

Alright, I accept that you didn't mean it to come across that way. Unfortunate implications happen. I'm not going to act like one of those "death of the author" meta-analysts who insist that authorial intentions mean nothing. On the other hand, I hope it's helpful to you to be made aware that my mistaken interpretation is possible from the content and that you'll do what you can to avoid giving such a false impression --if nothing else to avoid mistakenly alienating people from what has the potential to be a great and successful game.

To start, I would suggest that you find other terms to use than "Alpha" and "Beta" because those are used in some extremely toxic gender war philosophies by misogynists and misandrists alike. On the misogynist side is the PUA crowd (and their legions of moronic followers) who use Alpha and Beta interchangeably with "chad" and "simp" in a framework that states that either you treat women like shit and screw them over by any means possible aka "run game on them" to have any sexual or romantic success, or you treat them with caring and compassion and get walked all over, taken for everything you're worth, and get nothing in return. On the misandrist side you have women who have bought into a similar framework and claim there are two types of men, masculine men who are inherently abusive rapacious predators and those who reject masculinity and thus are safe to be around.

A lot of this will go away when you're able to introduce more routes, which I was unaware that you had planned. It's unlucky that the two routes you've had time to introduce so far coincidentally line up with the gender war stereotypes of male nature, and even one more option will probably defuse much if not most of that.

In particular, a path where you're able to play a hetero male that isn't railroaded into becoming a sex criminal and actually respects lines of consent while still very much desiring to have sex with willing women would be ideal as a middle ground between the two extremes currently being presented. It would send a signal that those two extremes do NOT represent men as a whole and are not intended to make a statement about the inherent nature of the male gender, they're just two options on a spectrum that will be filled in further later in development.

Thank you for the polite reply, and for clarifying your intentions. I really feel a lot better about where you're going with this now that I know more of what you intend the future of the game to look like.

This was an infuriating experience.

This author only allows two options, one subjects the main character to a sissification process that forcibly turns a straight male virgin into a feminized gay bottom, and in the other the player character remains straight but the game railroads them onto the route of a scheming sex criminal.

You cannot play a female character, a bisexual of either gender, a straight male submissive or a vanilla straight male either. You can't even play a gay man who was already gay rather than being railroaded into transforming to a gay man.

Leaving aside the horribly problematic message this sends about men, the game does nothing in its content warnings nor its description to let prospective players know that the game is targeted towards a very narrow niche in terms of sex appeal. Instead it merely bills itself as erotic cyberpunk science fiction, and doesn't reveal the narrow focus of its sexual subject matter until it railroads the player into it.

Do better.