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Bug report. Alelxrander's route, I cannot use factory key after getting a key from tentacle room

I can't seem to progess ran and iron's, after fighting with iron. I did everything even doing the right one as choke>choke>choke but its the same gameover and I can't progess Iron's fight 1.

As an 0.28 publish out as a patreon, the story of snowy mountain event will continue. you either pay or wait until 0.28 will be public. 

And honestly, damn. I said it since I started the novel. Smash

[Spoiler]

I absolutely hook and played til getting all the achievements there is. This visual novel is not just awesome from its arts, background, characters, writting, music to routes and quick time event, but the feeling this novel giving me that I can't revisit twice when it ended. 

+The story
-Doesn't confusing and the story can be follow easily through the beginning.
-The story is very good, from the gods, to the species, to the little detail.
-Is focusing the protagonist, Hasvah, as a character development.
-Is not romance based.
-Is not NSFW. Blood and Gore still be seen.

+Arts and Background
-It's so fucking good.
-Lot of arts and scenes in a little span of said arc.
-When the speech going verticle and there's a images describing the texts, goddamn.
-Not enough save slots for me to saving all these arts. I demand more.

+Route/Decisions and Quick time event
-so many routes that I feel sorry for the studio to doing part 2. 
-Many choices to pick. Up to 4.
-Choosing any quick time events lead up to different routes/game over as well. (I die many times and I feel dumb)

+Music
-I'm vibing. You screaming, running, seaking freedom all you need but I'm going to vibe. 
-Not going to lie, the main menu's theme song making me hit in the feel when I looking to arts of Hasvah's.

+Characters
(Design)
-Lizards; separated to different 7 species. Each of the tribes can be easily tell which is which. Focusing on Ur tribe as protagonist is one. It's great to be reminding from time to time about this tribe's strength but it easily predicted at the writing whenever there's a fighting scene happen.
-Lyoka; Is a human with green skined. The design are not that anything but it making me wanting to punch them in the face, kudo to the designer. Hasvah giving them a title: "Slave that owned slave".
-Human; human.

(Characters)
-Hasvah; this character's writing is incredible. He's more of a listener and act toward more actions, making his character really likeable and not annoying. The character's overall design is plain, it's one of a thing I like, he doesn't have anything is what makes him interesting. He can be silly sometime.
-Kihira; meh. Be there to be Hasvah's lover, know so little but just that. "There's never any person done this to me before" says to Hasvah after he almost got her killed.
-Eul; He's okay. Little screentime. "Achieving the dream before dying" character.
-Alice; Great. almost scream rightaway like any fearful person, but as a kid, she didn't have any streath to scream because really scare. Until seeing Hasvah speaks and be sure that she can be safe around him.
-Dir; very good. Playing a role as a father but he has his own character that is really likeable. 
-Ulkai; Great. kill Hasvah rightaway after hearing Hasvah's work with Dadar in the first meeting. Love him or hate him, he's speaking fact.

+World building
I might will download The heroes of Savvarah so I will edit this later
-Incotal
-Kaluta

This novel is too underrated. I really recommend, really, I can't give this more than 5 stars. 

this is a long comment since I just finished the novel and really looking forward to this novel so [spoiler]

Art

-Just as you look from the preview arts, you will certainly have a lot more beautiful views from this novel. It's beautiful, I can't much because it really is.

-The dialogues with a detailed backgrounds are amazingly well done

-character's design: the main cast (Reamus, Alen, Jymsar) designs are generic, but also outstanding, just like any side characters. I adore Follen and Marchedon design the most.

Characters

-Personalities: the main cast sometimes are childish and being strict are their whole personality at the beginning of the novel and some dialogues, but later on they got their character development and be likable. The side characters are not annoying and pushing the main cast to go further, good.

-Relationship between characters: Jymsar and other watchmen; it kinda cute, I don't have much to say. Alen and Chila; their interactions between two are short but we will learn further on on Alen's prespective, it can tell why the two acting these way, Alen acting toward Reamus and Alen's goal which is nice.

Plot

-Very confusing at the beginning, still confusing further on but not as diffucult as the beginning to catch up, really worth the time spending to this novel

-if you are looking to romanized the characters, then this is not the novel you looking for, it is a heavy plot with world building and lot to read, but the novel isn't finished so they will be more to look forward to

-There's a side non-canon that has an nsfw pics. I feel awkward going through Reamus and Marshall lmao, the art of them going at it are amazing is as good as any other backgrounds.

Decisions and Routes

This is the main issue I wanting to talk to the creator, GigaSaddle, I appreciate whether you wanting your plot and interactions to be, because I know it's using lot of times to having many routes

-There are too little interactions we can choose, only two options.

-Most of the decisions didn't do anything further to the plot, only few dialouges are changed. Such as; Anny's nails (I didn't see this one coming because it so random and why do this even a decision), the shadow's accept or reject (why is this an option when rejecting only changed the first few messages), truth or lie being umbral to Everwind (this one I expected the most but he spotted the lie kinda into his character)

-The only interact I see that changes the story is either stay with Alen or Jymsar, further when we chose who to stay with, there's only one decision and just one until it just a whole reading part, and that decision didn't push the story further or change the path anything.

[If you reading this until now, I recommend this novel]