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Thank you so much for your kind words!

Spooky! I really loved your take on Alice in Wonderland! The character designs are quite eye catching :)

50 cents:

-Minor grammatical mistakes

Wow, just wow! What an amazing story! I really loved the differing art styles and the personality of the mirror being!

Thank you so much for the feedback, we're glad we could convey the Halloween-y atmosphere! We'll be fixing the bugs soon!

Thank you so much for playing our game! We're very sorry for the bugs, this will be fixed soon!

What a lovely demo! I really enjoyed the puzzle mechanics! I look forward to playing the rest of this game!

50 cents:

The drag and drop mechanic was not very clear

Love love LOVED this expereince! I had such a lovely time being immersed in the weird and wacky world you have built! Absolutely looking forward to the full game!

I absolutely enjoyed this experience! The story is very engaging and I hope your team are planning on polishing this even further!

50 cents:

Like the previous comment, there aren't a lot of voice lines that I could hear.

The sprites sometimes overlap the dialogue box for some reason

I also ran into a crash while trying to play a game with the woman (see attached)

Loved the story so far! Unfortunately I ran into a crash during Ayesha's route

Otherwise, the visuals are really cool and I wish I could see more of the game!

Lovely kinetic story! I really enjoyed the story beats and learning the truth of the MC :D The messy/sketchy  art style really gives this game character and ties this horror story together. I look forward to seeing more of your work :)

50 cents: 

Movement into different rooms is a little less obvious, I needed to mouse over everything to find the arrow

I'm unable to get past the living room, is there something I'm missing in order to go upstairs?

Interesting story! I hope to see more work from you!

50 cents:

-The tense is inconsistent throughout

-Minor grammatical mistakes

Thank you very much for your feedback!

Unfortunately we had to make do with using a bunch of asset packs, but the plan is to draw them all so they're consistent in art style ^^ We'll keep the sound mixing in mind and fix that soon.

And yeah, I'm not sure what causes the error myself (nothing google will tell me, but I have a feeling it has to do with all the variable checks the game does that web builds struggle with) , but if you would like a less annoying experience, please do download the non-web builds as they run fine!

LETS GO LESBIANS WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Loved the story and the characterization of Fu Xuyu, I had so much fun exploring the different endings!

Absolutely in love with this retelling, however I have encountered a crash not too far in :( Please see the screenshot below

Still, I really love the watercolour backgrounds and the dynamic music! I hope you'll finish development!

I loved the story! I'm hoping you're planning on adding CGs in the future! I really enjoyed watching the characters grow individually :)

I loved the story! I'm hoping you're planning on adding CGs in the future! I really enjoyed watching the characters grow individually :)

50 cents:

-A few minor spelling mistakes

-The music occasionally cuts off randomly

-Some lines of dialogue repeat themselves

cool, do you have discord?

hello, would you be interested in joining my team? we have a programmer and an artist.

hello, are you still looking for a team? I'm an artist and a Ren'Py programmer

cool, i'm an artist and Ren'Py programmer but I'm also looking into using Light.VN. would you be interested in teaming up?

hey! are you still looking for a team?

the art is brilliant, the voice acting is wonderful, and the dialogue is funny as fuck. 10/10

fun gameplay :)

simple but fun :]

the mechanics are really unique and it was definitely challenging!

good god. excellent game

My laptop could barely run this game and I was practically spinning around as I walked around, but regardless during the short 5 minutes where I wasn't worried of my laptop having a mental breakdown, it was very fun

funkiest music ever but i got stuck in the first level lmao, 10/10

really challenging game, my only complaint is the dialogue sound is a bit loud but otherwise, i love it!

Fabulous bad game

Thank you so much for your valuable feedback! The conga line part took me out fr, but thank you! We will continue to improve the writing and designing of The Grey and any future games :] I must say I am curious about what personal dislikes you have regarding the game, but if you are uncomfortable with sharing them its perfectly fine!

Sent you a DM on Discord!