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I like how it lets me play after the timer ends, without scores obviously but i love finding patterns.

Correction: The [E] prompt says to interact with things. It was my bad :)

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Hopeful for this game, cool ideas!
I really want this game to be successful, so as a dev myself I wanna give my opinion with detailed reasoning after watching the trailer and playing through the demo. (Of course, that's only my opinion, also i have not worked on movement shooters yet!)

Pros:
- Most of the mechanics are relatively polished, I really liked kicking around and shooting up a bunch of paper dudes.
- Kicking exploding barrels and bombs are the best. Really captivates that dopamine kick when you do it nicely. (Is there a bit of help where the barrel lands? It so, it feels really natural and awesome, as for my experience playing the demo)
- The graphics and theme is really unique, fun, and manages to be a bit scary while also being goofy enough to enjoy.
- Only one actual dynamic music yet, but it is really complementing the bigger fight waves, giving you that Doom rush when you hear it :)
- I got interested in the stickman dude. What could they be up to...?

Cons: (more like, needs polishing)
- Quality of tutorials are inconsistent a bit. Some mechanics are explained perfectly, but for an example, there is a prompt [E] to close notes (as I remember), but it was not shown for sharpening the pencil, I was stuck there for a minute to get it the first time.
Two abilities were a bit hidden, 1: jumping higher from a crouch, i discovered it accidentally, 2: sliding below enemies to kick them up in the air (I only knew this from watching the trailer a second time after finishing the demo)

- The pencil's hacking needs to be more fun, i expected more doors and secret passages to draw instead of the security panel hacks. (Finding, erasing, then rewriting the panel is many steps for a single door, which is good for 1 puzzle, then becomes a hassle when faced more times, but hey, this is just the demo!)

Not really cons, but my other opinions: [SPOILERS]
- I actually had no problem with the long times between fights, The only thing i was bummed about is that the demo ended without a last big fight. (There was like a solid 5-10 minutes of not-shooting then game ended, me expecting a last fight at the huge room)
- The game's story was really the most interesting with it's enviromental storytelling, and events (glitches, stickman dude), not the notes thrown around. But hey, they are also just optional to read so that's nice :)

Hoping to have a nice release my dude, i want to see more cardboard dudes get blown up!

Luckily for you, there is also a zip file which somehow missed your eyes. 

Also, the price shown is only suggested. You are able to pay whatever you think is worth the product, be it $1, $10, or $0. 

Sorry this was an utter shock to you.

Thank you for the kind words Kuya!

Thanks for the opinion, and the video!

Enjoyed the video. Thanks so much

Much thanks!

Thanks for the comment and video :)

Thank you!!

💕💕💕💕💕

Thank you!

Thank you for your comment and video!

That was my thought process too. :) Thank you for the comment!

Thank you!!

Hahah! Thank you!

This is all I know to try:

1. Redownload the file using a different Browser
2. Clear the temporary files (From your PC)
   
3. Do an AntiVirus scan if other files than mine are also affected (.rar or .zip)
4. Update/Reinstall WinRar

Thank you for playing! My honest apologies for the glitch at the end :(
You were right about what should have you done, though!
Great video!

Really enjoyed your game, it has a nice atmosphere, and interesting characters!

The only issue I had with the game, is that the directions were a bit unclear sometimes. (For example, when we get to look at the map, the highlighted road to the woods, is barely visible on the actual road, would love to see a crosswalk or something else on it, to make it more apparent!)

Nevertheless you made a great game, It was quite intriguing.

Thank you for pointing that out, and sorry if this caused any inconveniences. :)

Sorry to hear that!
If you refer the downloaded files not working, you need to download WinRar to open up the files.
If you cannot download anything in the first place, you should check your internet conditions, or any firewall or antivirus blocking your downloads.

Hah, never expected this! Thank your for the effort of speedrunning the game. :)

Whoops! My bad here! This was supposed to be a WebGame for the Game Jam thus an exit button was not a necessity. However, I did not have time left to have a proper web build, because of the deadline, and forgot about the lack of exit button. I probably patch this after the Jam ends.

Thank you for your feedback, and sorry to hear this issue. Unfortunately, this is a Game Jam submission, so I cannot make changes for a week, until the Jam closes, unless I decide to quit it.

Hello! I'm pretty sure you either do not have Winrar installed, or if you do, you need to right click this file, and click "Open With" and then choose Winrar. Most likely you tried to open something as a Word document, and Windows set it to default for all files that's similar. If this happens to this download only, then, I'm out of ideas!

Reminds me of when I wanted to make an Ant game, for real, haha.

Thank you for your review and opinions! 

I agree, the truck driving experience is rather inconvenient, that is because instead of writing drive-mechanic code from ground up, I used a premade code  that is pretty modified by me, just to be as good as it gets, to cut down time for the jam. Would done a better job with more time, but this is how jams work haha~

Thank you Frog :)

My monitor's aspect ratio is 16:10, And the resolution is 1440x900

I felt bad for the doggo for pulling it around like a maniac, nice game btw, played and rated :)

Oh my god you were the one with this crazy idea lmao, played and rated :)

Finished it, pretty creepy horror game! :D

Thank you so much! :)

This is my favorite platformer I played in this Jam! Really clean looking and nice mechanics. Wish there was more levels!

https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-7/rate/1420356 Here is my horror game , will check yours too!

Thank you! :) <3

Thanks so much! Haha,  I wish!