This is so cute <3
Dreamfall887
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Hi there Walldeaf! I've just finished the demo and wanted to give some feedback. :)
Pros
I noticed you made the introduction cutscene shorter. I think this was a good idea because it tells the player what they need to know quickly and allows them to get straight to battling and exploring right away.
I like the profiles that appear when a party member is introduced.
The battle system is very fun, all the party members were useful. I ended up fighting a lot of battles just so I buy all the skills for Brenda. I'm also happy that Brenda starts off with a bow and a boomerang, instead of asking the player to pick one.
Brenda and Nathalie are adorable together lol. I liked the little dance they did when they found the water crystal, and how Jake awkwardly tried to join in lol.
The music is great.
The game has great presentation, I liked the status menu and how it has the party member and a picture of their hometown. I liked how you included a story recap. I was also happy you kept the "moo" noise when the player gets a trophy. It's very amusing lol. I also think it's cool you evented so many things (the stat tickets, Brenda's level up screen, the scan ability, the title screen) yourself instead of just using a script. Very creative! The mapping was also really good as well.
I liked how there are different ways for the characters to get their skills (using a skill over and over, leveling up, buying from the skill shop or getting it from the senseis at the dojo)
I liked how the trophies give you exp and money. Gives the player more reason to try and get them all.
I liked how the dungeons were short as well and don't overstay their welcome.
Cons
I found a typo (Chaos is misspelled as "Choas")
I'm not sure what Pancake Power does. I don't think the lady selling it tells you. I bought a pancake and I didn't notice anything different and I feel like it didn't last that long for it too be helpful.
I think the scan ability should also show the enemy's elemental weakness as well.
The game crashed twice because of the Sleek Pop Up script. At the Chaos Shrine, when I phased through the metal gate and opened the secret treasure chest, the game crashed. The second time it crashed, was at the Mystic Shrine where I fought a skeleton that gives you 2500 Rella when you defeat it.
Final Thoughts
I had a lot of fun playing this game. Great work! :)
Hi, I'm Dreamfall887!
I am a user on the RPG Maker Forum and I wanted to start uploading my games onto itch.io as well. Nice to meet you all! :) This is my first completed game.
Story
One day, Tia and her friends Ashley, Zoey, and Jasmine find themselves lost in an eerie mysterious forest. They soon discover they have wandered right into a trap, set by an evil soul-stealing demon! Will our heroines escape the haunted forest alive?
https://dreamfall887.itch.io/escape-the-haunted-forest
Feel free to check out my game and leave feedback, it helps me a lot. :)