Thinking back on the way I was typing at that time. (I have... Issues. Incase that wasn't apparent by my insecent need to correct people on their mistakes.)
I wasn't aware that I'd said that it couldn't be improved, and childish mocking aside, he gave some good pointers. They just came across as... Forward thinking.
I'll re-read his paragraphs if you wish?... Try and give a second opinion?