Np, yw, I hope it wasn't too bad of a critique.
I hope to be of any help & maybe give some ideas, also I'm interested in whatever there is to come.
I must say this is a decent start so far, but I feel like there's some constructive critique needed.
(Also, I'm uncertain about your plans so please take these as some recommendations as you please)
1. Night structure
Don't get me wrong I think the nights are fine, but it's currently hard to indicate what night it is or even choose an "unlocked" night.
Do you plan to add extra features that involve nights?
2. Visibility
I feel like there should be some small changes to how we see within the (office) cam room, for example maybe adding some windows or such near the doors, also the lighting during the game over sex scenes seems a bit dim making it hard to see enough details.
3. Story(line)
(If you plan to continue this game as its own thing or maybe later on a remake, this might apply.)
Do you have a story planned already for this game?
Will there be more animatronics?
4. Extra features?
I saw the NSFW content preference popup & somewhat found it useful but rather out of place, if possible add a settings/extras option in the main menu for such things, especially to make it easier for anyone to adjust whatever settings (sound volume, screen size, brightness, etc) you provide & maybe provide access to other features in the extra menu (special/custom nights, extra scenes/content, etc).
Again this is just some feedback, thx for sharing your project regardless of its condition.
(Also I did my best to list the top things that I was thinking during my first session playing)
Desiran, nice to see you here!
Speaking of reaction time, I'm sorry for this late reply as I was going to reply back to "KinkyKikker" as soon as I saw the email notification, but in all honesty, I was so reluctant to reply back because I couldn't conjure up how I feel with myself, rather it be wanting to create NSFW/other types of content, when it comes to myself I tend to stumble in circles either rambling or not being able to speak up or even worse not being able to do something I wanted to do or could've done.
I'm going to attempt to refrain from being as repetitive as I can, & simply say this-
With all cliches or such set aside, I have the need/want to create things but I keep holding myself back due to many things hindering me from being/wanting to be successful, I will admit the fact that I blame myself for all the mistakes I've done & made, which placed me into limbo many years ago but yet I grew very lazy in the recent past year or so, I don't mean to vent here or even to y'all, I'm just honestly lost within my ways, that is my main point, I still want to try but I just can't seem to progress under a fake happy facade I used for the past few years now, I understand that I'm an adult(21yrs) & should be able to be independent, but my excuse is I never had the proper guidance-
I will stop right there as I believe I said enough...
Np, yw.
Take your time, and do what you can & want to do.
Glad to hear that, I'm definitely interested in seeing what your future projects will bring.
I quite agree with your approach (also I found something that you might also agree with: https://desiran.gay/blog/post?id=2).
Anyways I've been pondering about making NSFW games, but I'm skeptical and paranoid about pursuing this endeavor, espcialy due to my lack of experience in game development and art skills outside of what I've done SFW.
I think your game feels unique and interesting. You successfully achieved the retro aesthetic and I think your voice acting was a nice addition despite your self-criticism.
However, while the story mode initially seemed to have a decent length, I felt like it was missing some key aspects after the last customer. Although it was good, I believe it could be even better with more interaction and elaborative context.
I was also curious about your plans for the future. If this is your first game, I apologize for being a bit harsh in my review, but I see a lot of potential in you and I wish you all the best in accomplishing your goals.
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Has lots of potential, can't wait till the game gets to a finalize, & hopefully have a sequel.
The art style is unique-
Imma just say, it's such a great game & I definitely recommend this game to some of my fellow furry friends.
Btw, I wonder how far you plan to take this, I imagine such game to have a big fan base soon enough.
Not to mention, take ya time, cuz the best things are done with time & dedication.
Much love, —MistoryFox
it was buggy but maybe you should try to use the other way.
also i wonder if you can make a gallery inside the game so when the new pics popup you can view them anytime if you have seen the specific pic, and can recover in saves.
question, will it be alright if we can discuss more on Discord?
if not it's alright and i can understand, but if we can i will provide my username to my NSFW account & my current active Account:
Flóòfzy Fox#5809
MistoryFox#3423
PS: please stay safe and creative, also not to mention pls stay MISCELLANEOUS!