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感谢你的游玩和评论！尽管是独自制作的娱乐作品，能得到你这番评价我很高兴。

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哇，谢谢你的通关和喜欢！角色能让你觉得可爱真是太好了。感谢你的鼓励。

(*´∀`)

我的这个邮箱地址是微软邮箱，gmail发送的信件应该也能收到。<3

请发送到我的邮箱：【frozen-iris@hotmail.com】，谢谢你！不过我最近没时间整理文件，可能要等到空闲一些的时候。

感谢你的游玩！也感谢你能喜欢。括号里的话很能产生共鸣，我偶尔也会寻找这种类型的游戏……想体验到更多中文制作者的作品啊。(*/ω＼*)

可以吗？非常感谢你！面对自己的作品，我总是有些腼腆，哈哈。很高兴知道有一个想翻译它的帮助者。(˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)ა

Wow, thanks for playing this game! Your compliments are so lovely, in every way. Also, I'd love to see your paintings. Could you please email it to me? (=´ω`=)

【frozen-iris@hotmail.com】

Thanks for playing the game! Well, the villain's perspective was a lot of work to write, but it was also a lot of fun in a writing sense.

Interestingly, it reminded me of a friend who even angrily condemned the morality of the protagonist. Instead of offending the author, this thing made me think that the writing for this game was done okay - at least it was immersive. Haha, thanks for your comment. ε-(´∀｀ )

Thank you for the compliment.I'm happy that my work has caused you much emotion.To be honest, I couldn't agree more with "not knowing everything seems better than knowing everything". Whether I'm writing for myself or playing other games, I'm partial to the dreamy, emotional outbursts of the plot.

As I was conceptualizing it, I was also thinking: how do I write a script to achieve an unexpected effect? My active mind always presupposes too many outcomes. Thinking too much is sometimes an advantage and sometimes a burden - that's why I enjoy shifting my mood by creating stories and socializing with others. ;-)

Thanks again for enjoying the game, it means a lot to me.ଘ(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭

哇，谢谢你的评论！结局的密码数字只有99（坏结局1）和01（好结局）是特意设定的，其他都由骰子随机掷出结果。

坏结局1是我最先设计好、写作最满意的结局，也是象征着即将到达终点却仍留下悬念的结局，所以数字是99。

好结局很容易获得。通关后就能意识到：它是一切故事的起点。外表很治愈…实际上是万恶之源。所以数字是01。

谢谢你提问了这个问题！真的很高兴玩家能注意到。(〃´∀｀)

Thank you for the compliment. (=´ω`=)

That’s very kind of you! I’m glad you enjoyed it so much.I wanted the true ending to have a sort of bittersweet feeling to it.It was a tricky beast to write.The third bad ending has to do with two values, so it's harder to get. But I had a lot of satisfaction writing this ending, and it achieved the effect I wanted.

I’m glad you liked how I portrayed both MC and Hoshino.The more I write this story, the more complex I want the characters to be.Sure, their personalities may have flaws, but I wanted them all to be interesting and touching to the player.

Finally, thanks again for enjoying the game! <3

哇，谢谢你的评论！我也是在晚上制作完成的，所以在这个时间段打开游戏会更有身临其境的感觉吧…◟(∗ ˊωˋ ∗)◞

Chiiaki! I'm so glad to see you again. Thanks for the lovely review~!The plot of this game is based on Story Relay that my friends and I played, so there may not be a follow-up. But I personally think there's a lot more to tell about the main character (well, and the mysterious being).(*^ ^*)

感谢游玩和留下评论！抱歉吓到你了…下次一定会注意标好恐怖游戏的tag，相信我。谢谢你喜欢这个游戏。;-)

Thank you for playing the game and leaving a comment! I hope the true ending is surprising enough, haha. Glad to see you enjoyed the game.

(*´ω`*)

Wow, thank you so much for your complimentary comment!I also think the writing of the English translation is quite beautiful.(*´∀`)

感谢通关和评论！得到这样的评价我能开心很久，因为作者的创作就是想写被人记住的故事。谢谢你！(ゝ∀･)

感谢你的游玩和评论！画风能被这样形容我很高兴，会根据作品主题尝试不同的画法，对我来说像在做实验…能契合游戏就太好了。在构思时决定要写一个情感纠缠不清和令人印象深刻的故事，完成一个我从来没有见过/玩过的病娇游戏。不知道玩家的视角如何，当时做完工程的作者——通常乐观活跃的人竟然陷入了一两天的惆怅情绪，哈哈。:)

从正常的角度看，6个结局都有坏处；但是从制作者的角度，个人不太倾向于写作完全负面或者是完全沉闷的情节，总想留下一些希望的余地。各人有各人的理解才更有趣，所以我乐于看到大家的感想，也乐于回复。剧情节奏这方面也感谢你的评价！如果通关游戏能给你带来这些感触，我很荣幸。(*´∀`*)ﾉ

感谢游玩，也感谢如此长篇的评论！作者喜欢阅读文字，所以看到这么一篇细致的通关感想，我相当开心。

关于美术：使用了像做梦一样虚幻荒谬的高饱和度上色，很高兴你提到了这一点。:)

游戏中的人物都属于表里反差强烈的类型。一方面，两人的部分心理活动是被隐藏起来的（或者说，是被作者刻意删除的）；另一方面，即使是明确写出来的文字，也想营造出虚实交织的感觉。这些暗示留给玩家解读。

借用一下收到的其他玩后感：星野是典型的白切黑，看似不声不响但随时有可能炸个大的。本质上是纯白善良的人，在经历一切之后主角对他造成的影响难以磨灭，他不能假装什么事都没发生。不过，接下来具体会做什么？作者不好说。

MC的扭曲确实源于身体与精神的双重病态，一个任性敏感、在自卑与自傲的矛盾里挣扎、极度渴望安全感的恶人，不择手段地增加讨价还价的筹码来独占想要的东西。你所用的“毒蛇”的比喻很有意思，药物的极端也就是毒，就像真结局里主角明知自己的行为错误，却不会后悔。

双方都知道这是非常不健康的关系。就算目的并不纯粹，成长中的陪伴与安慰是货真价实的，这份依赖从理论上来说很难消除。因此请对结局保持自由想象！路有很多条，至于最终走向何处——还是让玩家决定吧。

最后，再一次感谢你的长评。(*´  `*)

非常感谢你的游玩和评论！我不经常使用公开的网络平台，创作游戏也是一种工作之余的私人兴趣。如果想交流感想，随时欢迎你发来邮件。只要看见就会认真写回复的。ଘ(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭

Wow, thank you for writing such a long and serious review, and I read it carefully. I was touched by your comments on the plot, the characters, the text box, and the music, especially the music: I love soft and lively piano pieces, and I'm glad we have similar musical preferences.

Regarding the English translation, I am not confident in my English writing skills, so I am grateful to the friend who was willing to help me with the translation. Seeing these comments from players, the author generated unspeakable good feelings.

(*/ω＼*)

感谢游玩！这条评论让作者有点脸红（好的意思），谢谢……fighting!!(*´  `*)

Thanks for the comment! I do aim to shock players when I write, so I'm happy to get a review like yours. As an author, I appreciate you playing this game. (And I must also thank the friend who provided the English translation.) (*´∀`)

感谢游玩和评论！虽然大概率没有2.0…还是觉得这个故事的未来不应该由作者决定，请玩家自由补全吧。ヽ(○´∀`)ノ

感谢游玩游戏！也谢谢你的温暖鼓励。(*´∀`)

感谢通关和评论！特别是“有理由的，有理智的疯”这句评价使我有些感触。前期初看不合常理的文字，得知真相后或许会多一些不同的感受…星野的心理状态其实一直处于某个临界点，随便往哪个方向倾斜都可能酿成危险的极端，正是这种不稳定性很有趣。总之，谢谢你能喜欢他。(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭

Please choose the option for MC to express annoyance and a bad attitude while maintaining Hoshino's favorability.Then it will automatically enter that ending.<3

感谢游玩！(*´◡`*)

感谢你的鼓励评论！(*´∀`)

哇，谢谢你通关游戏和评论！如果发现bug，可以将具体内容发送到我的电子邮箱：frozen-iris@hotmail.com。在我闲下来之后会尝试修改的，感激不尽。(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭

Thanks for the comment and the like! Your compliments are very touching. (▰˘◡˘▰)

感谢你的喜欢和评论！这是一个业余制作的游戏，但我确实是在叙述方式和精简文本下了一番功夫；最后呈现的效果足够使作者自己满意才会发布出来。而你提到了这一点，看到这条评论，我也是动力满满。再次向你表达我的谢意。(*/ω＼*)

Thanks for the likes and comments! I don't often post my work on the public web, so checking this account occasionally is enough. I've been working on my next game recently and your comments have given me encouragement.(*^w^*)

哇，感谢你的通关和评论！如果这个游戏能给玩家留下一点印象，我很荣幸。ଘ(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭

感谢你的评论，我很开心！(*´∀`)

Thanks for playing and reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it!ଘ(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭

Yes, no problem. I'm glad you like this game.<3

Wow thanks for liking my game. Your comment makes me feel happy.(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭

（＾＾●）小狗是如此可爱的…感谢游玩。

Haha. It's true that this may be a bittersweet story, but I'm still satisfied with it from the creator's perspective. My initial idea was to write a script that the reader wouldn't find the truth without reading it in its entirety. Thanks for playing the game. (*＞◡❛)