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Thank you yes, I had a good day. I looked over the graphics a second time and took some notes you can take them as tips:
- I really like the animated text and the colors you used in there, it marks the most important things
- also the colors into the room where the player wakes up are very good
(all in all when you use colors it´s best to look at the saturation of the colors, only the main color should be the most saturated. The more the other colors are away from it on the color palette the less saturation they should have. That´s not a direct rule but a good way to start, it´s often taught on youtube, you can watch thousands of videos to this, they´ll explain you way better what to do than my text)
- the other thing is that your drawings look like you were unconcious while drawing. That can be fixed easily through drawing daily (even 10-15 minutes will improve your skills, trust me). You can draw from imagination, from real life and also from pictures on the internet (for example: you might not see a whale all the time, you can draw it from photographs made by others or you can first draw a flower from imagination and than you draw it from real life or from a photograph, that will also give you a new way of thinking about the world, you´re gonna think more and more "3D")
_ the last thing is that you´ve combined sharp, beautiful pixels (sry, I love pixels) with freehand drawing + the free handed stuff looks like I forgot to put my glasses on (it shouldn´t be that harsh but this describes it the best) it´s not good to combine different types of art, even the most professionals don´t do it. It just feels a little wrong to look at.

At the end I wanna say that everything I wrote is for your improvement. I wanna show you things that could be better, but I still like the game and it´s not as bad as it might seem after reading my comment (don´t now if you think so too but when I analyse things I´m so direct it always sounds a bit evil. I do the same when I look over my own work so don´t worry, it´s really not meant to be evil).

Wish you also a nice day and when you need my opinion again - just tell me.

At first thank you very much for playing the game!

Also a huge thanks for your comment and I´m happy to hear that you like the art and the controls.

I can´t tell you that you do something wrong... I dunno what happend but I tested the text before building and uploading the game. It worked, but it´s not working anymore... I tried it out by myself (if you are interested I work on the project in my freetime and I´ll make everything work from upload to upload it´ll get prettier, but it´s gonna need a little time I´m sorry you can´t enjoy more than you´ve already seen). 

Thank you for trying out my game later. I´m very interested in your opinion and have a nice time on your trip :3

Hello and thank you for that beautiful game. I really like picking up all the candy and got better and better at avoiding the red ones even if some evil red ones still made it into my stomach, really not delicious!
It has a nice music and even if the graphics need a little improvement (that comes with the time, don´t worry) it was really fun to play.
You already sayd that it lacks on story, but you still tried a little story at the beginning, I like that. So the only thing you could make better is a longer time for collecting the candies, I had to restart the game so often because mom picked me up, please give me more time to knock on some more doors.

Hey there it´s a very beautiful game! The graphic is great and even if it is simple it is funny to find out what description belongs to what object. The atmosphere of the game is relly chilled, I like the whole style of the game.
The only thing is that it could tell a bit more of a story, through the text or upcoming events, dunno anything that tells me more about the people who live there.
But all in all a very beautiful game. The first one I played in this jam because of the beautiful image.

I've read about the comic book game you're currently working on. Now I'm very interested: What is the topic about, what's the theme? 

Most important of all: Are you going to upload it on itch?

This game has a really cool way to jump and I love that little ghostey ghost! The spikes that don´t hurt the ghost but the ball make the game even a little more unique. 

The story you´ve written in the description - I like all the crazy names, the Ghost Ghetto and all that stuff. It´s cinda funny and very creative.
Have I already mentioned how adorable your ghost is? -Yes, I have, but it´s worth writing that down twice!

To me the game doesn´t have much horror feeling but that doesn´t matter since it brings its own feeling in the world, it doesn´t have to be horror, the ghost is enough (the cutest ghost I´ve ever been). The rest of the graphic is also well done, a colorful foreground with all the nice townelements in the back fits perfect to the chill and at the same time concentration-mode-music.

All in all a great game. Please do more of it, like you´ve cinda promised.

Your game has very fitting music, pictures and well worked out characters. That creepy breadhead, I like him very much! Remembers me of an anime I have watched once - 'Assassination classroom'. The teacher has a character nearly similar to him, just a freak. 

And your freak makes very enjoyable games, even if people die, that adds the fun to it and also the horror, makes my heart beat a little faster while clicking around! I also like the graphics and love how everything matches. The sound gives your game a nice touch and atmosphere. In my eyes you did nothing wrong.
I have to mention: I actually don´t even like text based games, but you add such a good story with the text and through the different decisions and the well written text, and especially through the minigames you´ve made this one very enjoyable for me. Thanks for making that game!

This game has very, very good graphics! I like the blood that is spred around and the graveyards, also the light is really making a good atmosphere.
As a feedback I actuallly wanted to say that a little fog would make a better feeling or maybe a howling wolf that you hear from time to time but than i saw your video dev log and heard that you wanted to add some monsters that may steal the ball... way better than only a bit of sound and fog! 

It´s a great game, keep going for it, sounds and feels good. Cinda chilly because of the minigolf and also a little different due to the horror-atmosphere, I like it!

Nice to hear that you had fun! ... and really good to hear that I got you scared.

Thank you for your comment!

Oh thank you for your kind words! I'm glad to hear that it is scary 'cause I've never thought of making a horror game and really didn't know if the atmosphere would be scary enough. 

Have a nice day!

Oh wow you have even played it again... ?What a pleasure to read! I don't know what to say but thanks that's really nice! 

Oh no in my game nearly everyone is evil except the things that don't move! xD 

Happy to hear that you still had fun while playing! 

Oh yeah I really have to communicate better what to do in my games. It's so clear to me but of course others don't know that! 

Thanks for your cood critic! 

You´ve made a cool game with really worked out characters, nice graphics and a big story behind it, very good!

You´ve created a really fun game!
My neighbours must have heard me screming when I got killed (yes, I often do that when I die in games) and I had a lot of fun fighting against the monsters and go fishing, too.  This one is definitely one of my favourites in this jam!

My hightest score ist 72, but after that I only got like 60 points, there were so many enemies! Or maybe I was just a bit too bad at shooting.
It is a really nice game and even if it looks so simple it got me hooked up for a while I like these little figures and the music creates a nice atmosphere!
The fact that the enemies  com from the top to the player really adds a lot of fun ( and yes I was able to hit some of them before I died!)
Cool game, keep it up!

Thanks I´m so happy to read all of that.

I like how much fun you had when playing the game.
Have a nice day and keep it up yourself, your game is really great!

Thank you so much! Words like yours keep me motivated.

You´re right it isn´t that scary, but I was still beating it with enjoyment.

I tried not to be too dump for the game, but I was. It was still a cute little game even if I didn´t come far. I like the music and the setup. It doesn´t seem to be very horror to me, but it is cute.

Wow this game is totally cool! Very good story, fitting music and you have also put so much work in the graphics!

I saw the icon and I liked it, saw the page of the game and I liked it and at the end I played the game and guess what I like it. It has beautiful graphics, nice sounds that add extra atmosphere and I have played it longer than any other game so far.  Fun to play!

This game shows that I am not good at sports. Not in real life and not even on the computer.  But it was still a nice experience!

The idea is good, but  it would have been cooler when there were more sound effects and better graphics. Just add some little extras if you are faster than expected, that´s always a great idea.

That is a nice way to combine the two themes. A little too many enemies in the endless mode, I couldn´t concentrate on throwing the ball ´cause I had to kill them. But anyway I liked it, killing enemies with a ball is something a little different !

That was my first time ever having fun while playing pong!

Thanks a lot!

 Yes you are all right at first it is a little complex for such a small game.

It was fun to play! I couldn´t beat the second stage ´cause I fell down again and agin but it was really nice. Good levelmaking, the hearts were always on different places and spread around the map very well. I like that game.

It was fun to play! I couldn´t beat the second stage ´cause I fell down again and agin but it was really nice. Good levelmaking, the hearts were always on different places and spread around the map very well. I like that game.

This game is amazing! It creates a very good atmosphere of outdoor and later more and more a horror feeling. It scares me, but the horror doesn´t just come from jumpscares, it comes from the very well designed story. Even the way you are telling your story is really impressive.
Again: Great game!

I like the idea of the game and the sliding effects make it seem like real ice. It was a bit hard to play tho, but still cool.  Please add some sounds the next time, they make a whole difference and give a atmosphere. 

I appreachiate your way of thinking. I didn´t know how to combine these themes by myself, just impressed of what you wanted to do.

I was first wondering when I´d be able to move around a player but later I noticed that it was a text adventure. My fault. I personally don´t like textadventures too much, but the graphics are in pixelstyle, I like that a lot.

Mentionable to me are the many options the player has. That must have been much work! And you did a great job with that. All in all it´s a good game.

What a helpful comment! 

I hope I´ve fixed the error, it should now be playable thanks to you.

Oh no I didn't see your post early enough so I couldn't play your game but a huge THANKS to your comment. This is the most helpful one I have. Really very much thanks and have a very great day! Bet you have a nice game, I'll try it out soon^^ 

Dunno if I'm allowed to answer or how to text you directly (maybe I don't see 'cause I'm on my phone right now) but I think about joining the jam and yeah I'm new to this, too (only made 2 games and one jam) but maybe it's fun to work together. Is there any place where I can write to you to team up (if you wanna)?

Thanks for your comment you motivated me very much :3 I'm happy to see that you enjoyed my little soundsystem! 

This one was really fun to play! Go on making such great games, I like it.