Thank you! Cloud Empress is such a wonderful setting. I can't wait for the Life & Death box to ship... I hope you enjoy reading my little adventure. Feedback is welcome if you have any thoughts you'd like to share!
Thank you for this thoughtful critique. It's useful to hear what works but also, more importantly, what doesn't! I'm looking forward to editing this adventure, cutting down the number of rooms and reducing the verbiage (my greatest weakness), when the jam is over.
