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Very short but so well put together and very well illustrated :D

Nice Text-based Pick a path, but there are some things I would suggest looking at.

Right now, there are lots of dead ends (which is fine - early access), but you might want to either remove the "this is what will happen" or put them behind spoilers because it kinda ruins the feeling of wanting to come back, after all, you know what is going to happen.

Could I also suggest that you alter some of your paths so they don't really "tell you" what will happen? Right now, when going through it, I feel a little like your choice was pretty much a "spoiler" of your path, and there were no real surprises throughout the story. Also, I notice that many of them keep returning to pretty much the same type of "scene" just a page or two before, so this makes you feel that maybe the choice wasn't essential to start with.

Good writing overall, so I am looking forward to your future work with this.

Hi FarkethShew,

Sorry, Blue Fairy Media (JudooTT) is on holiday right now. 

Do you have Discord? Because if you come on there I am sure myself and some other people can see if we can resolve this with you, but if we can't she will be back from holiday in a few days.

Lovely work - but sorry to say you do seem to have an error happening when getting to the page starting: 
"I arrived at school the next day, letting out an audible yawn as I stepped through the gates. Normally that would warrant a scolding from Hitomi, but she never got the chance as someone else came rushing to grab my attention."

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Apologies! An error has occurred. You may be able to continue, but some parts may not work properly.

Error: too much recursion.

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Hi,

Started playing but a few issues are happening.
1) There is a window on the lower right which shows variables, and also allows you to turn on and off DOM View, and Debug view. But I can't seem to turn that windows off, and it is blocking text

2) If you suddenly don't have full screen, you can't seem to make it full screen again. The full screen option doesn't work. This wouldn't be too big an issue, other than the Windows on the Lower Right takes up most of the text space.

Once again another amazing and wonderful piece of work :D

I didn't know I would like this, since typically, I don't like things without "quests" and story. But the thing is, you have added numerous things into this to make it very interesting, and mini-stories if you follow the people wanting to be transformed.

Again, Amazing!

In fact, I do :D I am trying to see how I can give it to you in private :D LOL

In fact, I have it in my Link.To page so it isn't really secret :D

So my ID in Discord is "becci#3832"

I might have to talk to you more seriously on this then - because I do think it would be a nice idea - probably a group of 5 or 10... maybe something we can look at :D

This is by far one of the best games out - yes it is random - but the way it works, and you can have random tales is remarkable. I so want to do a 10 party team, and then create a 3D comic of their adventures! :D

This will be great to hear because I loved playing it!

This is by far one of the best TG/TF games I have played in a very long time. I do hope to see more from you in the future!!

Interesting that you have started again in another engine :) I do like this engine a bit more - but - still miss the old one :D

This is amazing - I really love what you have done here! The controls and everything are a little jarring, but the overall game idea and that you have the slow transformation of the character model is just spectacular!!

I would love to see more on this type of game from you - it is really worth some money for donation.

We need to see more of this type of game because this is moving away from the "everything TG needs to be Visual Novel, or RPGMaker". This proves there is a great potential in new game medium.