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damn... played the demo and it was hella great! the mc feels amazing and had their own personality shining through. frikkin' gorgeous art and the male leads so far are great, in addition to really cool side characters that still had some depths to them. idk if this was asked and answered before, but i presume there's no poly route since that'll require more stories to add/more coding to input? honestly i just stumbled upon this gem trying to satiate my need to play good otome isekai game, and im glad i found it!

This is a GxB otome meant for the female protag. I've played every LI route, played being accepting of the power or rejecting it, and seen every ending. 

The only downside is that the power wasn't explored enough. There's lots of room where it can be expanded. Maybe there's a sequel in the works?

It's one of the better VN out there, honestly. The replayability is pretty decent, with different flavour texts, so there's something new to read. The art doesn't have that "wow" factor, but it's still lovely. 

I recommended it, especially since it's free.

I see. I loved family interactions a lot, and I was pleased to see that there are surviving members of MC's family that she could still interact with(the uncle, grandma, and cousin), hoping there would be more interactions between them. It's why I felt like there should be more interactions between MC and the father, IMO-- regardless of whether the player chose to be antagonistic or wanted the father to be a dad. I guess I could understand regarding the mother part having less interaction.

I could totally see the queen and the captain guard being the least jealous type, though(lol). It would be hard to write jealous scenes for them unless MC does something outrageous 😅

Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter(and the revision)! 

Gosh. I kept on replaying this IF. Riven is my favourite by far, and I'm dying for Riven to remember their memories with MC. 

I went and checked your Tumblr. I will patiently wait for your release next year! Do get lots of rest, Lin. 

Wow. I didn't know why I hadn't encountered this one till now. I loved what you wrote, and the ROs are all likeable. I do have a few gripes, though... like the interaction between MCs and their family; it was short and abrupt and to the point. I mean, it's hard for me to care much for the mom and especially the dad when there's so little interaction between them.

I also feel like MC's background(from childhood to young adult) seems... lacklustre. Probably because of the dad being a barely active father. It does seem odd though... like the dad wants to be better, yet he was written differently. His behaviour doesn't make sense.

Other than that, everything else seems good. I went for the prince(highest romance points) but flirted with the captain guard whenever I could and noticed a jealousy scene(the outing to the food stalls). Do others also have these jealous scenes? I haven't played other routes hence the question.

Heya. I would like to subscribe to your Patreon, but what is included in your subscription-only version(early content) compared to the public version? I tried to look into your discord, but it wasn't stated anywhere. Or did I miss somewhere?

I like the premise. I'm looking forward on how the story progresses from here, and how the MC will be utilized in the machination of heaven vs hell.

This is pretty good. I like the characters that were introduced so far.

While there are noticeable grammar errors here and there, it doesn't detract the enjoyment I had from reading your story.

Added to collection and followed. Will wait for the next one!

I thought I'd read this story somewhere, and yeah, I remembered that this appeared somewhere in dashingdon and I quite enjoyed that one. BUT, it was a pleasant surprise that you made some interesting changes to it here.

I have to say, playing with 2 MCs are pretty much intriguing and I'm all up for it. Although, I imagine switching POV between two MCs need to be done properly, or there will be immersion breaking--- kinda. It's rare to play IF with 2 MCs so I'm very curious how it'll turn out. I can already tell that you are highly ambitious with your work, in addition to how other ROs can be pursued by both MCs. Is that one of the reason why ROs are no longer gender selectable because selection of RO are expanded?

In any case, I loved your previous work, but I love your new work even more! Can't wait how the first chapter is gonna go. Keep up the good writing, Faust :3

This is actually pretty good. From the introduction to MC's background(and more to uncover) to their interaction to other accompanying characters. The ROs are likable enough, even V. I can't wait for the other 2 ROs. Other side characters are alright. They pretty much fulfilled their side roles.

I'm wondering how impactful MC's skill will be throughout the story, especially since they now will have to unofficially start their investigation to locate the true murderer.

Can't wait for the mext chapter!

Honestly, there should be more IF with evil oriented MC. I loved the premise and can't wait how the story progresses from here. Even without the romance aspect, the feature where you could choose how to destroy the world? That alone already hooked me in. Pretty ambitious though so all the luck and time to you author. I just hope this isn't abandoned.

That was super short but the premise itself is interesting. I'm interested in how the plot progresses and how the MC is handled.

If only we can romance the Eldritch, maybe because he(they?) had more exposure but I liked him(them?). Also, the pronouns are all over the place. Does everyone(I mean some) have a second set of pronouns? Because they/them are also used a lot despite identified as either she/he. Made me confused who was being referred to.

Annnd I know it's just chapter 1 but I find myself not caring about other ROs. I like Alzurahm.

Also, please don't tell me the story is going with MC 'adventuring' with these people. But then again I guess it had to be, since it'll be hard to actually score some romance points with those ROs.

Well the story is pretty good though! I'll patiently wait just for my Eldritch. Is it really not possible for Alzurahm to be one of the RO?

This ended right before the exciting part comes! >.< will eagerly await for your next chapter :D

Also, while I like how other authors wrote detailed environments/sceneries in their stories, I love how you prioritize the interactions between the characters more. Your style is straightforward and not too verbose, which makes everything that happened in your stories easier to remember and digest, and memorable too!

Love everything so far! Honestly can't wait what happens next!