I thought I'd read this story somewhere, and yeah, I remembered that this appeared somewhere in dashingdon and I quite enjoyed that one. BUT, it was a pleasant surprise that you made some interesting changes to it here.
I have to say, playing with 2 MCs are pretty much intriguing and I'm all up for it. Although, I imagine switching POV between two MCs need to be done properly, or there will be immersion breaking--- kinda. It's rare to play IF with 2 MCs so I'm very curious how it'll turn out. I can already tell that you are highly ambitious with your work, in addition to how other ROs can be pursued by both MCs. Is that one of the reason why ROs are no longer gender selectable because selection of RO are expanded?
In any case, I loved your previous work, but I love your new work even more! Can't wait how the first chapter is gonna go. Keep up the good writing, Faust :3