This VN is pretty good so far. Hopefully I'm not the only one who kind of digs Gunner
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As much as the story does give a good taste, I feeling that your Kickstarter is a bit ambitious in you're amount. However in case you don't meet those goals are you prepared to do this in the long haul with a smaller budget? (I do not know the normal amounts for creating VN)
One thing I'll note is in regards of the voice acting, not that it is bad or anything like that. I personally find it jarring when I'm reading text so I have Voice disabled.
In regards of the characters you've got quite a well-rouned bunch, which includes my personal biases for some characters.
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I would like to emphasise I did enjoy the read so far and I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this story, and I believe that is a good chance once you start making update beyond the demo you will fine interest rise further.
Good luck and congratulations on taking one step of many.
(Major Ending Spoilers And Personal Mistakes Were Made) Okay. Honestly this game caught me very much by surprise, it end up sitting around on my computer for quite some time before I actually got to it... I unintentionally reading this game while I was depressed (don't worry, I ended up feeling humbled by my choices if that make sense)
Very well done on the writing and despite it being somewhat short I found it enjoyable to read and able to get more emotion out of me than a decent amount of others.
I know that there are different routes, although I do not know to what extent (I guess 3 currently with one or more in the works?) feel free to correct me if I'm wrong.
I look forward to seeing where this goes.. and who knows we might even end up with another VN
I had ended up with "two endings", as I got curious and decided to change my last choice.. my first and the one I honestly prefer wait with Caijoru as that's where I got being honest on my first run.
My second.. self-sacrifice just thought it needed mentioning, (those that have gone through it would know why) needless to say not a fan of that "ending" but hey that's what I get for being curious so yeah :P.
However I think it's best that I don't read anymore this until I'm out of this funk. Keep up the great work and ignore my dyslexia if there any spelling mistakes (if this gets deleted I understand why so no hard feelings. Just figured I would make an attempt to show some support) <3