Thanks. I have a lot of it all fleshed out in my head, making little notes, really want to expand on it with more writing jams as it forces me to think more about all of their stories.
Thanks, I really wanted the ending to match the beginning and vice versa. Also wanted to leave with just as many questions at the end as you started with.
Thanks for the feedback. I was trying to make him detached due to the meds, maybe it was too subtle, as with his injuries, i was trying to make it sound like it was what he overheard from the medics attending him. The problem with a word limit i suppose.
