There's much more in the works! This is merely a conclusion for this story, just be on the lookout for more!
jstrayer31
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I guess I'll write this as sort of a pan-ultimate review/critique. You absolutely do not need to read this or take any amount of it as serious if you don't want to!
For such a extra-terrestrial story, it actually starts off very believable and sticks with both its themes and its background. I couldn't think of any glaring plotholes or situations the MC could easily weasel out of (with the exception of just outright leaving the palace for good). A gripe I've seen on this page quite a bit is how the MC is a bit grating at times and while I can agree with this, to a certain extent you have to take it in stride as he is brought to an alien world against his world. In fact, I believe this story is a very good version of what would happen in real life.
Mechanically, the VN does play well with the exception of updates screwing any manual saves (but not quick saves for some reason?) and the fast forward option is fairly consistent if not just a bit on the slow side.
I am a big fan of CG's and my only point for this VN in particular is I simply wish there were a few more romantic ones, but alas that isn't a very big issue.
All in all, actually a really well made VN. I didn't feel cheated or like this story just dodged a plot hole or didn't address something. However I would agree with the below comment of putting some sort of major emotional warning as there are certain scenes that did in fact make my blood boil, which I hope was the point.
Thanks for reading, and I look forward to update 16: Crying my eyes out!
Hot damn. Probably the best part of this story is that it really doesn't pull punches, like ever. I actually find myself frustrated, but not because this story is "lacking" or anything, but because it was meant to be that way. I'm supposed to feel unfulfilled while the MC is just sitting idly by doing nothing. It's frightening how real this gets.
Jesus, how does this manage to keep getting better?! God, I love the writing, the characters, it all feels so natural and so realistic, while also managing not to be to nihilistic. It's a damn good story, and one I don't mind playing through time and time again for the updates, just to make sure I haven't missed anything ^-^
I don't think you understand how much of a masterpiece that you guys have created. This is so beautifully written I actually teared up and felt emotions I haven't felt in a long time. This damn visual novel is so good, it rivals Nekojishi. Please, please for the love of god, keep working on it. My friend is your patreon, and honestly as soon as I can comfortably, I will become one too. You guys have made something so damn magnificent. Please, continue it.