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Wow, thanks a lot for the long comment! I was afraid I went a little over the top with the first part and tried to ground it a little with the second, but yeah, a confrontation between two very knightly knights on both sides would have been more of an epic.

Thank you, and thanks for the tip. I didn't know what "tightening" meant regarding text, but I've looked into it and get what you mean.  In German, I tend to overly complicate descriptions because it kinda sounds stale otherwise, English has a lot more short and interesting adjectives, I'll try to keep that in mind next time.

I really liked that one, this dark twist to the Arthurian legend. Very cool description of the "Lady" of the Lake too. Good job!

Thank you for the nice comment😁 The original idea was a lot more silly and fun but it got "grimdarked" a little while writing it, so it's good to see it was still smile-worthy. Not to bother you, but can you tell me how I can improve the editing issue? I'm not a native speaker so it's really hard to figure that out on my own😅