I like the concept of the game. I also like that its 3D. Sometimes the colliders are off. The boost is way to slow, add more velocity to make the game less boring.
2. Theme
You pretty much nailed the theme. Nothing to say here. Perfect
3. Aesthetics
I like that you went with 3D. I would suggest you to make the models more high poly because the edges look way to sharp. I know that low poly has its own look but here its a little bit exagerrated. Make the map stones bigger and maybe add a ground and environment.
4. Sound
The background is music fits the environment. Maybe add UI Sounds. The Jetpack overheat sound is awful. Please make it softer or just an alarm.
Overall, 5.34/10
Which is great for a beginner. Keep it up!
Please take this feedback with your brain and not your heart.
1. The gameplay is simple but effective. I would suggest you to make the player faster to add pace.
I understand the concept behind the game but just extuingishing fire is not enough. The fun factor is missing. Add something small and simple that adds a constraint. Maybe you need to pick up water to extuingish the fire, which involves pumping by clicking fast.
2. You pretty mush nailed the theme here. Your whole game is the theme.
3. Some of your art looks a little bit crappy which is an universal problem. Mine looks bad too. Maybe add real shaped things and not cubes. (I did the same mistake). Try out other things that don't involve pixel-art. Trust me it looks way better. Also adding light and post processing improves the visuals heavily.
4. The sound is mediocore. Im sure you did not have enough time. If you want to work further on your game add UI Sounds for player feedback, background sounds and randomized water sounds because it gets annoying after a while hearing the same sound.
Overall, 4.89/10
This rating is pretty good for a beginner (10/10 is like perfect game).
Don't take this feedback into your heart but into your brain.
1. I like the concept of the game. All the small minigames are great and I am sure I didn't even play them all.
2. In one minigame where you need to click the app that is using the most power when you click on analytics I can't return and its just stuck there. I would suggest you to remove this minigame because its not that fun like the others. Concentrating the fun on the others is way better.
3. I like the visuals. The pixel-art is well done. I would suggest you to change the font because its too blurry. Go with something more readable.
4. Sound is great. I would suggest you to add click sounds for the player feedback.
