I know and has I also said in the comments I have an american friend helping me with the grammar problems could ya also give me some examples to make it easier to know what was wrong and wich sentences ya don't understand so I can change so it's more easy to read and understand
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Hiya, 1st thank you for reading the vn, but there's no need to use such language, I accepte all criticism, for grammar yes I'm I still need to learmln more english so it can be corrected, when I said improvements I also was reffering to the new sprites, bgs and adding some small to the vn and what people are thinking of the story so far :)
hewoo,im really happy ya like the story so far and yes i plan on adding more scenes to the part where James first goes to the village i plan on adding them on the next build, and im working with friend now and im adding animations and reworking on some art and also more cgs and bgs for the first parts, glad ya like Dylus smile :3, is he your favourite character?
Glad you like the story so far :3, thank ya for the critiques im with a english friend to help make the speeling and grammar correct maybe next build everything will be correct and I will also corect the streched art when i got more time, and Im glad ya like our boi Dylus hehe and about the ballroom and sprites what ya dont like, has for clothes and sprite size i tried to make them to the canon size and shapes of my lore :3