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I know and has I also said in the comments I have an american friend helping me with the grammar problems could ya also give me some examples to make it easier to know what was wrong and wich sentences ya don't understand so I can change so it's more easy to read and understand

Thank ya, yeah i undestand what ya mean, could ya give me some examples to make it easier to know what was wrong?

My vn will only have one route, has for me writting and coding differet routes would be really hard and would even take a ton of time, so i wanted to go with just one narrative for this story so no Benignus route but im glad ya like the story so far, but ya can't marry a priest xD

Hiya, 1st thank you for reading the vn, but there's no need to use such language, I accepte all criticism, for grammar yes I'm I still need to learmln more english so it can be corrected, when I said improvements I also was reffering to the new sprites, bgs and adding some small to the vn and what people are thinking of the story so far :)

Oh lol, why ×D

Of course my bad, hope ya like the new build :3

Thank ya, was able to finish it all will be releasing it :D <3. Hope ya like it

Thank ya for the answer, I finished the build today gonna release it. Hope ya like it. <3

It's oki cuz the reworked sprites and some more imporant bgs are too so if you want i can update with the new sprites and a bit more story :3

Thank ya, grammar and spelling needed their corrections and im working that and doing an rework on old stuff of the vn, hope ya stay tuned for it and like what's next, animations will also be thre but might be just 2 for now :3.

Thank you again also hope the story is interesting so far :3

That's why I want to do it in the fisrt place ^^,  and also I'm working to make the art and ui look smoother and trying to correct all grammar and spelling mistakes that might, thnak ya for the ya spent reading it hope ya can stay and see how the stry goes and enjoyed it :3 <3.

Ah i see, every criticism can be good to build a better story and art and i hope ya stay tunned for more updtes :3

hewoo,im really happy ya like the story so far and yes i plan on adding more scenes to the part where James first goes to the village i plan on adding them on the next build, and im working with friend now and im adding animations and reworking on some art and also more cgs and bgs for the first parts, glad ya like Dylus smile :3, is he your favourite character?

Ah got it, maybe a code thing with the positions and there is always room to improve.

Glad you like the story so far :3, thank ya for the critiques im with a english friend to help make the speeling and grammar correct maybe next build everything will be correct and I will also corect the streched art when i got more time,  and Im glad ya like our boi Dylus hehe and about the ballroom and sprites what ya dont like, has for clothes and sprite size i tried to make them to the canon size and shapes of my lore :3

Glad my work is motivating people <3

Yes im working on the code for the 3rd build dont worry next build gonna have some new characters :3

i meant mentioning kinks at all i wanted to keep the comments safe, hope ya can understand so any comments with kinks i will ask to bed deleted pls, i want the comments safe for everyone

Thank ya for your liking my work, hope to keep ya for the next builds :3 <3

Hello thank ya for your time playing my work, i aprecciate ya liking the story and characters i created, but this some things on this comment are a bit inaproprite so if ya don't mind could ya remove it?

Thank ya for liking it, the 2nd build just dropped off hope ya enjoy the new content >:3

Alrigth i shall work on it, when i get more time:3

I'm happy ya like more shall come just need time to write, code and do some more art ;3

thank ya for liking it, i guess it was a Easter gify for ya all.Hope ya liked the cahracters. <3

The android version has been release sorry for the delay. Hope ya like the story.

The android verison has been released x3 hope ya like it :3

The android verison has been released x3 hope ya like it

thank ya for likinf my stuff means a lot and ya all shall learn more about him <3

For everyone seeing this that want to play on android i'm sorry there isn't a version for it yet, i'm having some problems with renpy not working with jdk and im trying to resolve it, thank ya all for your time and i'm really sorry for the inconvinence.

Thank you for liking my stuff <3, i apreciatte the time and care ya put into reading my work, but faith is important for the characters and it means some special, i hope ya stay and see the rest of their adventures.

Yes i'm trying to make the android and ios versions fast as possible but having some issues with renpy at the moment thank for your time, i think the phones versions arealmost done sorry for the inconvinence

Haha, that was a good one, thank you for liking it, glad you like Dylus and thank ya for offerring to help me with the grammar but i alrady got a friend to help me with <3, is a great thing ya like also the rest of the story to thank again for the time to play it

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Thank you for playing my vn, i'm glad ya are liking the story and im aware i've some errors in grammar, but i will try to find someone to help me with my english and code more, i want to make this vn be a good experience and again thank for your time to play it.

Thank you so much for the time to play it, hope my world interest and ya like the characters. <3

Thank you for being interested i'm working on it. I think it shall be here soon. <3

No spoilers >:3

right now i just have on my page account not in here but i will add it, hope ya enjoyed this vn <3

Hiya, im planing in the future to add everything but since the story is development i don't want to spoil anything important, thank you for your time to play it <3

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