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Thank ya so much for the criticism, i will try to correct that in future builds, i think the i already intented for why the felines joined the boars, while James is listening to Fernando dialogue, something withbthe Lion King :3, has for next build, wait for a ton of new stuff happening i dont want to spoil so be ready for a ton of new interactions. 💖❤️‍🔥

sent a friend request in discord <3

Thank ya for liking my vn, glad ya liking it so far, but what do you mean ya need your pc didn't work, mine is 8gb and it all runds smootly maybe you had something switched in your definitions?

Yeah... that's my bad, I needed that part to happen, and that was I could think for the plot to progress the way I wanted, but your feedback its always good, thank ya for the comments and hope ya stay for the next builds❤️‍🔥🤗

Well i told ya before i had a friend from US correcting my script, he needs time to check everything up and thats why some parts are still in need of correction, and i also had a friend, learning coding, that helped me with some code things like adding torin drolling or the part where dylus flips and go to the kitchen, the text going sometly and the mouse looking like a mini sword. So please don't say that, because i had two friends helping me at the time of build 3, i didn't want to manage more people with at that time cuz i had school too and couldn't focus 100% on it while talking with more and more people, hope i can clarify things.

More help would be apreciated yes, maybe i can dm ya in twitter? Since i need to work on the discord for the vn still🙏

Again he tried but in the end he wasn't  able to tell Dylus :3

Yeah, most of what ya say its true haha, but i referred James trying to tell Dylus but not managing to do it, because of his busy schedule and him resting always in bed do to his fractured rib.

James martial arts aren't the best, the King never saw something like that before, since in Hyvindle they just used weapons or punches in fights and he wants for his soldiers to learn so they could prevain something like invasion that happened years ago, James didn't who they're talking about, even thinking it could be a cult thing, but he i had him thinking talking with about it to Dylus but he couldn't do to Dylus busy schedule, but maybe i didn't pharse it that well? Pls tell if there anything that is wrong and I will correct it.

Thank ya means a lot to me, glad my work makes some people happy^^, wich parts ya would say, i could make the pacing better?

Nice, yeah there is much to learn still, I'm planning on focusing on that part now for build 7 has tensions arice with Fernando take over of the castle, I don't want the plot just to focua on the wolfs but focus on other animal folk too, so I  assure thisnext build will have more species :3

you mean King Morih, as white wolf, and Dilefor, has the silhouete?

yeah that normal, but im happy ya liking it so far x3 <3

ooo i see haha, yes the king knew a human would come, but not James, thats why he said offspring of Adam, and he did not practise magic, that is evil, he's has a blessing from the Lord and trough that he saw what Jetki new since it was passed down generation to generation. i might create a power scaling ref for ya all, but the good guys just have their natural strenght and some have blessings, while the bad people use magic and dark things like sorcery.

was ya that commented?

I'm confused, wich white wolf, Dylsu brother? There are no misteries of him he died sometime ago before James arrivel in Hyvindle :>, and what mysteries are curious about :3.

Thank ya for telling me your thoughts and theories always apreciate to hear what people think, I think ya are one of the first with interest on Dylus brother, haha

Hey what was the coment about?

Glad ya liking the story so far, any theories of the plot so far? What arre your thoughts about it so far?

Well that i need to check, cuz idk any of them, but i have a french friend that migh help with that if that's the case. And about your theories would love to hear what ya what ya have to say:3

Anything on your mind, and about the language thing i might add portuguese has another option but when i finished the story

A sequel lol? I'm still writting the story and i believe there many builds to go haha, But would like to hear your thoughts and theories about it

I'm happy ya like it so far, hope ya stay tunned for the rest of the story and more ^^ <3

Thank ya for reading my vn, what are your thoughts on it? And if ya have more questions feel free to ask?

Cyro is kind to his friends, and all the walven kingdom, but he doesn't like other species and foreigners, since his parents were killed in front of him by th lion king, and he was also angry at James do to him punching him in the face and he smiling while in the duel :3, I hope i could clarify things, I might add things since i see some people are not understanding some parts thank ya for pointing that out <3. Hope ya are liking the grammar corrections this time x3

Let's us say he was the right human at right time and place to go to hyvindle.

thank ya glad ya like it <3

Hiya, glad ya like my project so far, about your questions, some of the creators from pixbayare in the end credits of the vn, and others are from pixbay itself, the vn will be full SFW yes, and I wanted to do a kind of different vn from the others and see how i can work like a project like this and wanted to share things i love with it oo

Thank ya, comments like this make me happy, all the support it's helpfull, I want to bring a good story at same time I do something different in the furry visual novels :3, I appreciate all the time y dedicated reading and writting this comments, and good news im almost finishing writting the scritp in vsc, just the sound effects, some music and 2 arts left for it to be done after checking any mistakes ;3 and don't worry i like to read what people think of the story and would like to here what are your theories so far if ya have any ofc.

Hey thank ya so much for the time ya dedicated to read the vn so far. I see your point in the art style and I'm trying to get better, my style it's like a anime and cartoon mixture, so im trying to make it look better and recently trying do a more layer for the shading part. Has for the grammar thank ya for understanding, I've done big check and even are correcting some early mistakes from build one and adding things I jumped a thing do to having classes at the time of some builds. I'm happy ya liking the pacing so far, I decided to have this figth to also had a bit of backstory not just for James, but the world building lore and individual characters too, because having the protagonist always read the information in books would be tideous for the reader and too had a bit of tension to the plot, Also thank yes ya are right I should demontrate how James trains everyday and migh start doing now like ya suggested, I added the pizza and burger part, to be they discovering human foods and have a good time with friends :3. And yes too James knowing that now sounds kinda funny haha, I will change that for sure xD and I didn't mention all the continents on Earth cuz i didn't find the need to add that but I can always do that. About the stomach thing, SPOILER ALERT- that was supposed to be a promonition of the future- Their first meet I kinda rush the things a bit, as I said earlier about thinking of the plot can be hard do to exterior problems xp but yeah was a bit rushed, and don't wory more of the bad guy treat will be explore in future builds :3, but this one another problem might happen ;3

I know and has I also said in the comments I have an american friend helping me with the grammar problems could ya also give me some examples to make it easier to know what was wrong and wich sentences ya don't understand so I can change so it's more easy to read and understand

Thank ya, yeah i undestand what ya mean, could ya give me some examples to make it easier to know what was wrong?

My vn will only have one route, has for me writting and coding differet routes would be really hard and would even take a ton of time, so i wanted to go with just one narrative for this story so no Benignus route but im glad ya like the story so far, but ya can't marry a priest xD

Hiya, 1st thank you for reading the vn, but there's no need to use such language, I accepte all criticism, for grammar yes I'm I still need to learmln more english so it can be corrected, when I said improvements I also was reffering to the new sprites, bgs and adding some small to the vn and what people are thinking of the story so far :)

Oh lol, why ×D

Of course my bad, hope ya like the new build :3

Thank ya, was able to finish it all will be releasing it :D <3. Hope ya like it

Thank ya for the answer, I finished the build today gonna release it. Hope ya like it. <3

It's oki cuz the reworked sprites and some more imporant bgs are too so if you want i can update with the new sprites and a bit more story :3

Thank ya, grammar and spelling needed their corrections and im working that and doing an rework on old stuff of the vn, hope ya stay tuned for it and like what's next, animations will also be thre but might be just 2 for now :3.