about MC being lost i have biggest issue with him not checking anything, testing himself or his own health (though I like that slowly changing his issues with thinking about her name)
And he sometimes has weird prio, ~i might be called out to Pay for 69 years while one hour is 20$? Lets go to school :D and just think about it for one second from while to while - i would be waiting for that report to be done while shitting my own pants ;d
.And question not being asked like wondering all about that lilith and then bah No lucy No saying any info. Wondering why nobody is worried about her? well imma go sleep :-D
Though I must add that i liked small details, backgrounds, that here are any actuall people except main characters, and they even move(!) details like we can see through window sis entering home. I didnt mentioned it before but its admirable, i love small details <3