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I am not much into these socials like patreon on this one, but so far as i can tell i actually like... devlog, the one on itch, its clear where we are at. Easy, so many Devs forgets about it and i really apreciate when someone keeps us informed on what going on and 'technically' how much more we have to wait.

But yeah, about game. Its interesting but I cant tell anything about story, its too early to say, why? Its pretty chaotic, we dont know like literally anything and half of this is not in mysterious way, just like you are lost, mc keeps to NOT asking questions we all want to ask, one look at place and done, almost not interested anymore.  I mean, dont get me wrong, just you cant yet tell if its good or bad because i feel like after all these days my 'main quest' really moved on last scene. It has huge potential, so its interesting as I said in the beginning, but I cant really tell how will it go in further, like no idea, 0 predictions. it may sounds harsh but No, its good game just too early for commenting On story.

Graphics is cool, nothing i havent seen but if it works then its good.

Characters, as i am liking almost every character, though i think lucy is too much one-personality-girl if everything she says is shy-way it is well... like she is here only to fill shy-girl tag, and to say shy thing and nothing more, everyone can be shy but nobody says literally everything one way.  Its not irritating, but definetely worth of look out. Healthy humans,  have every emotions ;) some are stronger and thats fine but dont overdo


Overall i am actually interested in and i will definetely keep on touch with it. even if its chaotic i wanted to know more about story. Sorry if anything sounded too harsh;)

Hey there, glad you like my posts :). Story-wise, it's intended to make MC look lost. He's totally unsure on how to proceed, what happened with Lilith, what to do next after he didn't find anything in that side street, where to go now, everything is a bit overwhelming and he's supposed to get help or figure stuff out while his normal life continues. Hence why I solve this one issue relatively "early", you'll see in the new version.

Some people already seem to have a good idea on how the story will progress, others don't which I think is good. It shouldn't be too obvious, but also not completely mystical so nobody can assume where it goes. 

Regarding the girls, glad they're appealing! I didn't go for 'tags', but to include some variation with a tendency to go for a pretty nice overall behavior, to have some nice friends all around. Lucy is indeed a shy one, but that opens possibilities for growth in the future. Amber seems like a nymphomaniac but that opens the possibilities for growth in another way as well. Time will tell, I've all planned already.

Don't worry, criticism is always welcoming! Even I don't see every aspect and might even overlook certain things. Hence why I appreciate it, when people have legit criticism and not just vote a game down because for no reason, this doesn't help at all! :D

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about MC being lost i have biggest issue with him not checking anything, testing himself or his own health (though I like that slowly changing his issues with thinking about her name)

And he sometimes has weird prio, ~i might be called out to Pay for 69 years while one hour is 20$? Lets go to school :D and just think about it for one second from while to while - i would be waiting for that report to be done while shitting my own pants ;d

.And question not being asked like wondering all about that lilith and then bah No lucy No saying any info. Wondering why nobody is worried about her? well imma go sleep :-D

Though I must add that i liked small details, backgrounds, that here are any actuall people except main characters, and they even move(!) details like we can see through window  sis entering home. I didnt mentioned it before but its admirable, i love small details <3

Hey, thanks for the reply! If MC would check everything, he'd be perfect and I don't want him to be perfect. He should look inexperienced, overwhelmed and a bit naive at the beginning. Naomi, the nurse, is telling him what to be expected after the accident and she has to know about it since she's the nurse in charge, right?

MC didn't pay for 69 years, in fact - it's unknown why this happens at all, if you play the game differently, there will be no mentioning of renting her for 69 years at all. ;D The bot has to report to the docking station for an upgrade though, so he also fears that they'll find out that he used her for free more than once (another fear to be found out). 

He doesn't want to include Lucy in any potential trouble, I think that's to be expected from a guy like him. Could write another path for it, but I don't have enough variables at the current state to have a clear path forward on how he turns out at the end. What else should he do at the end? Not going to sleep? :D He even tries to think about Lilith at the end, but his brain starts to hurt as soon as the thought appears. 

Just my two cents lol, anyway, glad you like the small details I included! I enjoy seeing the world live in the background and having other things , even small events, happening is kinda nice to see, imo. :)