Thanks for your feedback! Don't worry, I'm not taking constructive criticism badly. ;)
I'm a bit hesitant to expand the "before sex" portion, because I fear it may make people leave if they don't get fast enough to the "good bits". I'll have to see how much I can expand it, because I agree with you, it's still too fast.
Sadly, I can't do anything about AI pictures. They're the only way I can ever create that kind of game. I understand that it can be worrying, though, I have contradictory feelings about it myself to be honest.
I'm considering this kind of content, but to be honest, I'm a bit wary. The game is specifically targeted toward Netorase. You're not the first to suggest that though, so it may be a good idea after all.
Thanks for the art comment, but sadly, the art is not mine, it's AI generated. Believe me, you'd like it a lot less if I was the one drawing... :p
Thanks a lot! It will probably happen. ;) You can join the Patreon if you want to (or click on download the game, and enter an amount with 4 numbers before the comma, it would work to :p). =)
Well, the market for non-porn games seem to be oversaturated. In 3 weeks, Netorase Phone was downloaded 100 more times than my non-porn game, on which I spent more than a year...
I plan on changing some bits in the first chapters, mainly asking for consent to the player about talking to Ashley.
I also plan about having a social media app to display some "slice of life" moments, and adding interludes developing the "normal" parts of the relation.
But I'm also considering, in the future, greatly extending the first parts, and starting it before the player has talked to Laura about the lifestyle.
The saving system will be in the next version, it's already implemented on my side. It will work exactly how you describe it. ;)
The next update will probably be next week, because I have a lot of time on my hands these days, but after that, the time between versions will probably be larger.
The save feature will be in the next update. I finished implementing it yesterday. =)
Concerning Laura revealing the player's kink to Ashley, I'll probably move that section, and communicate with the player about it. You're right, it breaks trust.
The "too late" and "calm down horny boy" are supposed to seem playful, but I understand that they may feel interpreted differently. I will probably change the first, but may try to make "calm down" feel more obvious.
You're right about the "I'm not sure", I'll probably remove it.
It's a bit hard to convey a personality for the MC while keeping them neutral enough. My goal for him is to be secure, but loving the thrill of sharing, which is how I consider netorase relationship should be to feel healthy. I also want Laura not to do it only for him (which wouldn't be healthy), but I should probably explicit that a bit more.
I hope future versions will be more to your taste. =)
The text in the next version will be a bit faster. I'll admit I'm a bit hesitant to implement a "fast forward", as I feel it would ruin the rhythm and the ambiance. I may add an option to increase the speed though, but not too much. It will probably depend on the feedback of the players.
I will both post it there and set up a Patreon in the near future. I'm planning a "viable" version that I will be able to promote a bit more easily. One that includes at least an actual fucking scene, and a save system. I think it would be easier to "sell" the game that way. Afterwards, I'll build up from that.
Thankfully, I'm highly motivated, so it may come quite fast. =)
I don't have a Patreon yet. I thought it was too early for that, but you're not the first one to suggest it, so I'll probably set up one soon.
I did not know about F95ZONE! So I'm thanking you both for the suggestion, and the fact that you made me discover it. I hope it won't affect my productivity... =D
I think I'll keep Laura's eyes brown. It's a deliberate choice to have her be relatively "common". But you may have noticed that Ashley has blue eyes, and I plan on having potential interactions with her. ;)
I didn't think about custom names, but by luck, I already have a system in place for changing some names (because I had not decided about names for Ashley and Tara). So I will definitely do that!
I already started implementing "unread notifications". In the next version, there will be a red notification on the contact name. But having one on the back button is a very good idea!
I'm using Stable Diffusion.
I'm deliberately using confirmations to "slow" the text down, and avoid simply having text go on and on. I tried it and, in most case, it feels overwhelming. Is there a specific part in which you thought there were too many?
I plan on having Laura be a bit more suggestive and open in the future, as the relation progresses.
I also plan on having her talk about her feelings on the matter. Do you think she should do it more in the currently available content?
Did you find specific descriptions lacking in details? I admit it's a part I'm struggling with. I also don't want Laura to give too much details too soon in the story, I feel that she should grow more comfortable with it over time.
I plan on having a "social app" in the game. Having her dating profile changing over time is a marvelous idea, thanks!
For the friends teasing, it's absolutely planned. Ashley is already planning on nicknaming you Cucky in the near future (you will be able to tell them to not do that if that's not to your taste). And you can be sure she'll be teasing you as often as she can. But having them jump through hoops to get pictures is a cool idea, I'll keep it in mind!
Thanks again for all these suggestions. I'll keep all of them in mind, they'll help me make a better game. =)
Hello! Thanks for your suggestions. The save feature will definitely be implemented, probably in 0.3 (I'll need to implement a few things that have to be saved). A skip / fast forward is probably gonna be a bit harder, but it's in the plans. =)
