Thanks for your feedback! Don't worry, I'm not taking constructive criticism badly. ;)
I'm a bit hesitant to expand the "before sex" portion, because I fear it may make people leave if they don't get fast enough to the "good bits". I'll have to see how much I can expand it, because I agree with you, it's still too fast.
Thx :)
That's why I talked about the bestie, may be it can be spicy enough ? :)
But depends of what you want about your game, a fast one to the action or a more buildup one.
For me the blowjob is "already" some sex, not the full intercourse but already intimate a lot...
May be you have to ask to your patreon about what we think about this.
A way to keep some is may be to add 1 chapter in the progress of the story and 1 in the buildup at each release or something like that ?
But may be at least one more chapter in the build up involving the bestie and some "forced" exposure at some shopping ?
Hmn Maybe to help with both sides of the argument have her first "cheat" be with the bf but she's blindfolded and something happens mid way to relax her like she realizes it's him because the blindfold slips etc. This would build the trust with her bestie who imo would arrange the "meat up." Excuse the pun, not the biggest NTR fan but I did check it out and thought you did great, hopefully this helps and while I know it might be hard to edit the script to allow for a different first screen in my mind it seemed plausible enough to still get some "action" for those in need of immediate gratification.
