Thanks a ton for the feedback!
1. That's helpful, I tried to standardize but must have missed a few instances.
2. I'm not sure what you mean by this, but I'm glad you thought it was funny! I thought having failures being set to social or religious slips would be more interesting that physical harm given the setting.
5. Yeah, that would look better, I'll make that change.
6. I separated the tables onto the second page because I thought the flow would be better, but it does separate out some of the flavor while reading so I'll try with them intermixed.