Good concept, you could definitely finish this after the Jam. Nice Job!
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I was Expecting a little bit of something at the end for a sense of "closure", i think. in the future maybe you could extend the concept and create more trippier levels as you continue, to justify the dream (in a dream everything is possible). Overall a good concept that can be lead to something in the future :-)
Thanks for the review! Yeah we need to polish more and we want to do it absolutely after the Jam! The sound effect, an Hint System for the last objects and "Black-Dirt-Things", and much more.
It has a finale with some twists that give more sense to the story and the theme of the Jam, sad that you encountered this bugs... Thanks again!
Tonight i will check both of you then, if you want this is my game :-)
https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-7/rate/1419105
A little bit forced on the theme and some bugs, but overall good.
For the future (if you want to polish it) i think that you can do two things: the camera when in the car is veeery close and claustrophobic (when you are stopped); the music need some more variations, maybe you can choose 2 or 3 different songs just to be less annoying.
Cleaning, have fun with physics, kill the black spots aaaand... it has the horror tag but i don't want to say anything 😉
https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-7/rate/1419105
Cleaning, have fun with physics, kill the black spots aaaand... it has the horror tag but i don't want to say anything 😉
https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-7/rate/1419105
Cleaning, have fun with physics, kill the black spots aaaand... it has the horror tag but i don't want to say anything 😉
https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-7/rate/1419105
Cleaning, have fun with physics, kill the black spots aaaand... it has the horror tag but i don't want to say anything 😉
https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-7/rate/1419105
Cleaning, have fun with physics, kill the black spots aaaand... it has the horror tag but i don't want to say anything 😉
https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-7/rate/1419105
I liked the atmosphere a lot, the only things that a felt kinda strange is the "trigger" (i think that is one) for closing the backdoor of the truck, and the driving mechanic (veeeeeery slow at the beginning and then very slippery once more the truck gets more speedy). Other than that i liked very much!
Really interesting, i just got some bugs with the cards, but overall i enjoyed the atmosphere and the art style. I wish i have the possibility to press F to skip the dialogue appearing effect, sometimes the sentences were quite long. I see that, like me, you wanted to give a full experience with story and all, Good Job!
Yeah it's been a hell of a week, but i'm pretty satisfied. I'm also really happy to read that you like it, and you played it all because we created it in a way that it needs the whole experience to make sense. The only thing that i wish to had more time to do is make and insert more music (the last music is made by me)
A fun little game about cleaning with Physics, and narrative twists :-)
Let me know what do you think!
https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-7/rate/1419105