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monezzz

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I was charged twice and I'm not sure why. There doesn't seem to be a way to report it either

Is there anyway to get to the "forest" ? Anna is mad at me and I need to craft a bracelet but I don't have any of the cotten/fiber I need

Nevermind, I was just blind lol. Awesome game, finally got to the end of it, one of the better ones I've played on Itch.

I can't seem to find the "proper glassware" that I need. I've checked many places, I'm just blind lol.

It doesn't seem to let me embark on the first expedition. I can't see any buttons or places to click that would allow me to continue either

Well, if I'm free, I'm more than happy to go over things. I'm not as good as most, and suck at grammar but I can definitely help if need be. :)

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Okay so, Upon reading "Splif's" comment, I decided to give this game a go and give you some advice that might actually help if you wish to continue going forward...

Firstly, something I'd try to get around to is re going through the text's that the characters speak again and slowly, Sadly there was quite a few times that I needed to figure out what they meant to say, I'll give a few examples.
"She is typing something while you wait her"
"She is typing up something while you wait for her to finish"
Or
"____    _____ ? My name is Jane Strife, I hope we get it over quickly"
"____    _____ ? My name is Jane Strife, I hope we get this over quickly"
Final one I promise
"I think some girls think what I stalk them to their houses"
"I think some girls think that I stalk them to their houses"
However, I believe it might be better written like so:
"I think some girls have the misconception that I stalk them to their houses"

I think you get the point.

There are a few points that I'd like to go over but I don't know the text limit I'm afraid.
I don't mean to go on either, I used to ask friends for advice when I used to write stories in my spare time, So I hope I could be at least a little helpful :)

I don't believe they do, even at the start of the game you can see what is there and whats locked, if you don't have all of them unlocked it's most likely that it isnt available yet.

theres not an ending from what i know, by 17th playthrough i simply meant that i restarted from the beginning, i get pretty close to getting all of the islands but i start lagging after a while

ok, so i'm a big gamer, I like a bunch of games from total annihilation to Blue dragon. However I haven't found many decent games for a while when i stumbled apon this game, lets just say i really enjoy this game to a point where little games are. Though it may only be in alpha 6 as of this moment, its as i think of it awesome. I cant wait for the new update where i find myself checking the links to see if they have updated every 10 hours for the last week now. Hopefully i don't put much pressure on them when I say I expect great things from this game, they have my full support. Keep doing your best, I cant wait for the next update :D    now excuse me while i go start my 17th play-through of this game.