I commend you on writing Dragon’s Song 1. Writing for a solo instrument, especially a single voice one like the flute is very very much not easy. One little thing that I feel could elevate your song is by adding pauses to simulate where the flute player would stop to breathe. This not only makes it sound more realistic but also more of a memorable melody as it becomes much easier for someone to feel the phrasing and sing along to.
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OST Composing Jam #6 Submission jam comments · Posted in OST Composing Jam #6 Submission jam comments
Hi, I liked listening to your song. I'm a sucker for those punk octave guitar lines, but I might recommend putting the SoundCloud link on the project page. It could only be me that has a problem with it, as my one-celled brain clicked on the screen recording to listen to instead. I was very confused when it cut off halfway through the song and saw there was still a trumpet solo and banjo(awesome) solo left.