I don't know why but I thought this story was finished. So imagine the gasp of a sheer, immense despair that I released when I was graced with a "To be continued". Don't know if this is favorite territory just yet... but this is quite possibly the most "Blue-balled" I have felt after an update in quite a while. Im thoroughly impressed with the writing style and the comedic at times yet thorough expression that have been given to these characters and I suppose. I got a lot of good laughs, second-hand embarrassment and plenty of entertainment from what is so far done. I'm looking forward to other VN's you have made or will make along with the continuation of this on.
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First time playing through and I start with tg and I just wanna say where I think the stories going from the part I'm on where the MC is saying they should stop the scavenger hunt and I think the twist is the MC ended up bullying the dude in drowning himself and is getting haunted by him for it I'll update if I'm wrong or right, I like guessing storylines.
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Edit - I was very strangely close with my assessment of things, though i didn't expect the mc to be so hands on.
(More spoilers for some routes tread carefully)
Don't agree with everything said here but i think it will make an interesting discussion so i'll give my thoughts on this. First thing is I hard disagree with Tate's route being the weakest the story and characters of this vn are all great but Tates writing and backstory I feel like is the best by far. The concept of his past is really interesting to me and I think it was made really well. I also relate to Tates character a lot more than I ever can with Dallan and Aiden because the things he struggles with are things I had to as well (obviously not talking about the tribe here just saying lol.) and I find the way he deal with his loneliness and feelings of not being liked by the people he cares about and found how he always tried to be cheerful regardless to be really inspiring. To move on from just his character and to your issue with his name I think how it was done really fits with his character. He's not the type to let that drag on and asking the mc to name him just feels right after he almost died after saving him from the tribe. Really shows how strong the bond the mc and Tate made during the first chapter is. I understand that the name is a major part of Tates character so far but i think it was handled well. (hope i explained my pov of it well enough.) Also wanna say Tate's breakdown about the egg scene was really well written and gave me chills and has been the only scene in any vn that made me tear up.
Done simping cause honestly what characters your favorite doesn't matter much everyone has different preferences. To move on to the slavery scene I agree mostly that made me a bit uncomfy and found the defending of it to be stupid but I understand that the culture in the game is different than what we have and that they see (forgot what the lizards species was.....) as a monster and think it needs to be killed on sight and they (everyone but the mc) don't know that they can learn and be taught to understand language. They have no reason to see it as anymore than a monster because of the act the species has done. also quick reminder they are training to kill nightfallen knowing that they are training people to kill them as well it makes sense why they are treated roughly . To recap that I agree it's wrong but makes sense in the confines of the story.
Next yeah the mc's an absolute doormat it kinda bugs me too but it's a romance vn so it makes sense to have it like that because it makes it easier to explore the romanceable characters personality. But from what I've seen from the mc he seems like a people pleaser type of person so it's in character imo. (speculation but with how this vn's gone so far with it's characters I wouldn't be shocked if chapter 2 is more focused on the mc.)
To agree with you again this vn's amazing and easy top 3 in what I've read so far I look forward to route 4 and chapter 2. Have a good day!
(Pretty sure how i wrote this out sucks sorry.)