This was super weird and I definitely didn't "get" it or get very far (I think, it was hard to tell!) but it was very original and unlike anything else I've seen in Ink
Thanks! Yeah - I know what you mean about the start. I thought about it both ways, starting on the run in the middle of the action, but then went for the slight buildup to try and set the scene instead. Still not sure if I made the right choice or not :-)