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A jam submission

CredoView game page

A short ink tale about the power of stories
Submitted by starkholborn (@starkholborn) — 2 hours, 33 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Narration#93.8003.800
Theme#123.6003.600
Originality#153.6673.667
Overall#173.4003.400

Ranked from 15 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted

As I’ve already read, you were short on time this jam, but it’s a compelling start, hope you get the chance to expand it or use it as a jumping off point for something new:)

Submitted(+1)

Very evocative! Always a big fan of the kind of gestural world-building you're using here, and I really liked how you used the quotes.

Submitted(+1)

Nice way to explore such a large range of litterature. I read in another comment that you had a busy week end, but if you ever expand this piece (in the same manner you did for your video store stories), I'll be sure to play it again !

Developer(+1)

Thanks, I'd love to do an interactive book recommendations library! 

Submitted(+1)

Engaging. I wanted more. Would be interested to see where you might take this with more time.

Developer(+1)

Thanks! I think I'll definitely play around in the future with the concept of exploring a book and/or entrusting a story to the whim of a dice roll...

Submitted(+1)

A nice framework, or capsule, for a few thoughtful moments. Played through a few times to let it sit awhile.

(+1)

Short, but lovely

(+1)

This is a resonant message and you picked really beautiful passages. It's just a pity it's so short!

Developer

Thank you! Choosing passages from across a a thousand plus years was fun. I wish I'd had time to write something longer (I had a book deadline on the same day as the inkjam deadline!!)