As I’ve already read, you were short on time this jam, but it’s a compelling start, hope you get the chance to expand it or use it as a jumping off point for something new:)

Very evocative! Always a big fan of the kind of gestural world-building you're using here, and I really liked how you used the quotes.

A nice framework, or capsule, for a few thoughtful moments. Played through a few times to let it sit awhile.

Short, but lovely