yeah im not that creative with naming and stuff
But certainly you're very creative with animations and visual depictions ;)
I liked the drawings but the story became depressing by the end. I was expecting more choices given in the early part of the game to emotionally connect with the characters.
The game part of flying a kite was just 1 click on the screen. I don't know whether that was intended or a bug. A bit more description of the concept and intended gameplay would be helpful.
Good concept. Fits well with the theme. Reminded me of And Yet It Moves game.
Implementation could be better, physics was wonky for me when I played. The box jumped around with slightest of the movement. I think you have to reduce the physics timestep or do raycasting based collisions to make it smoother. Overall, I liked it.