The presentation/polish was really stand out, some of the best I've ever seen from a game jam game imo, but I'm not sure I understood... the game..., maybe this is me being dense but I didn't really have a sense for what to do or why things were decaying. Also, I think the audio may have been a unfavorable choice, it seems you were going for coffee grinding, but from my speakers it came off like glitched out static.
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I really liked the concept, and the story and theme really kept me hooked. A real standout in uniqueness, and I thought the personality in all the drawings and environmental text was awesome. The only thing I felt was missing was feedback on my actions, both in terms of the mini-games and the UI, as I found it hard to tell whether I was doing the games right sometimes, and definitely found myself double-clicking buttons and clicking the wrong things.
One of my favorites so far!
This story was real. The way in which the prose was written was extremely vivid, and I thought it was really good. I also personally really enjoyed the way the dream sequences were shown, it gave me a real sense of these characters.
My favorite part was reading about how the main character feels about Alex. They seemed constantly conflicted, and despite Alex's open arms, felt daunted at the prospect of even talking to them.
It was just really good :) I dunno what else to say
Truly an absolute masterpiece to behold; this game could single-handedly serve as the rallying cry for indie game developers trying to outsell Triple-A titles. With its deep, intense lore reflecting the quotidian struggles of the layperson juxtaposed with the feelings of wonder still persisting in modern life, expertly depicted with the curious rainbow cube wondering "I wonder what would happen if I fell down there". Not to mention, its seamless and subtle inclusion of the rainbow motif, a symbol of the LGBTQ+ movement, cementing this game as a quite potent piece of LGBTQ+ art and storytelling. Truly worth a download (two or three downloads to be sure) for 2-3 hours of pensive yet action-packed playtime.