You art is really good. The story is very goofy in a good way but not a fan of the gameplay. Essentially you just save before every choice, pick the obvious bad end, then the good one, making this a glorified gallery viewer than an actual game.
I much more enjoy the approach with the frog one where "stuff" happens in battle instead of just in game over. Its like MonsterGirlDreams, which does it really well.