Hey, just realized that I forgot to post it here. V0.4.1 will be out in Jan :) https://www.patreon.com/posts/im-alive-news-114019203
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Don't know what's going on, but you can try these alternative links:
Win/Linux -> https://uka257.mixdrop.nu/f/l64mqvvwf9k4z8
Mac -> https://uka257.mixdrop.nu/f/9ngrq463t1q9gz
Hope it works :)
Hi, my bad.
I forgot to mention that I've managed to fix an issue with the MC name (where it appeared as ??? when replaying a scene in the gallery). However, the only solution I found requires replaying the game from the start. I apologize for that :(
I also suggest trying to do that:
(Using the walkthrough makes it quite quick to reach Chapter 3).
It's funny because I also think of her as an escort. I guess I also don't mind because she's someone who doesn't like her reality.
Anyway, I'm very glad you enjoyed it. And thank you for the intention to support the project in the future!
And if you have any criticism or suggestions, feel free to reach out to me on discord =)
Hi! Thank you for your comment. It's good to know that some people think the same way =) In my view, the best part is the discoveries throughout the story. And her second profession is consistent with her life situation. Since the story was written in a novel format, there was no problem with this revelation. Unfortunately, when adapting it into a VN, I need to take extra care.
I believe the biggest issue for people is the fact that she is a prostitute, which reduces her value as LI for many, and also there wasn't a prostitution tag. The tag didn't exist because it's not a theme of the VN, and her profession is only briefly mentioned as a story element. I don't care about it, but it's a sensitive topic for many. Since I received a considerable amount of feedback related to this and as these small adjustments wouldn't impact the story, I decided to accept some suggestions.
Hey there! I gotta admit, your comment totally made my day. I can now say it's my favorite feedback, not only because it's positive but also for the level of detail you brought and for showing that I'm on the right track to achieve the story's goal. I love adding subtle elements intentionally, and everything is carefully planned, studied, and strategically written. So, I couldn't ask for a more motivating comment than yours. Thanks a bunch for that!
I'd love to respond directly to some of the points you raised, but I'm kind of a spoiler expert, haha. Well, I've already written the whole story, but it was in the third person and linear format. I decided to adapt it to a visual novel format with branching dialogues and multiple paths. I hope you'll enjoy it when the narrative reaches its climax, but that's going to take a bit of time =)
For the next chapter, you can expect a lot of character skill development, revelations about the MC's past, and some important decisions. When it comes to characters, Scarlet is possibly my favorite (maybe I shouldn't have a favorite, but I can't help it).
Lastly, thanks again for all the encouragement =) I work about 10 hours a day, so I have limited free time to work on the project, but rest assured, the next chapter will always come, no chance of me giving up, and comments like yours only fuel my motivation even more.
(P.S. Intentional? Not really. But upon reflection, well, attack on titan is one of my favorites, and I've always admired the plot and how the narrative unfolds. So it's definitely a strong reference for inspiration that's deeply ingrained in my subconscious, both in form and content. So the most honest answer would be a yes =) ).