Yeah I definitely agree. I wish I had enough words to make the characters more complex in the story. I guess it will be a good challenge for the next Jam ;)
Thanks for the feedback. I do wish I did a little bit more for the introduction. I had an idea of making the start seem more like a mission log but I see that I could probably write it in a better way.
I really liked the story. I like the idea of how the robot legions have carefully evacuated the elves off the planet and the huge contrast between then and now. Amazing job!!!
