that actually makes a lot of sense. i was leaning back on actually knowing what it is. know one knew the armor wasn't normal armor and thinking they had back up didst mean much when it could have just been one person. thanks for clearing that up. it was bothering the hell out of me
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like most games on itch, i approached this game with rock bottom expectations. the game turned out to be great. far better than i had imagined.
the pace manages to be perfect, i never felt the story lingered in one area too long. but also didn't speed along so fast that i couldn't stay up to date. the writing is fantastic especially with characters. they each speak and behave ever so slightly different.
what is there to say about the lore and world that others haven't said? the companions and dark ones are fascinating, but one aspect i praise above all is how the world isn't stagnate or in limbo without the protagonist's presence. you feel like events occur whether you are present or not.
one event i found strange and couldn't help but focus on entirely happened later in the story and ill be as vague to avoid spoilers.
in France the character is intercepted by several companions, they are fully convinced the character has back up. not only that but the character has armor that should absolutely be well known to companions, the companions who intercepted should have made an immediate retreat there. but this a different country so maybe the armor isn't as well known here.
but this presents another issue. this group has no armor and seems to only have a knife. now there are three of them sure. but they have reason to believe this individual has back up, not only that but they are in heavy military armor and is a confirmed companion as well. why on earth would this group armed with maybe a knife take on what looks like a juggernaut in military gear who is a companion and is likely to have back up? its a small event but it stood out as one area the game seemed to have no logic.
i can only conclude this group was next level idiotic.
aside from that single instance everything else was tightly written and i find myself very eagerly waiting for more chapters. this game stands among the best games this site has to offer. its up there with Eternum, Projekt Passion, Harem Hotel and Monster girl dreamers. 10/10
my main concern is especially mai and the principle, kiyomi as well. their head shape, eye placement and upper head dimensions are shaped off. they dont look right. ayumi and haruka look perfectly fine. i understand if you dont intent to tweak but i figured id give feedback. at least to me they look wrong.
the premise and story thus far are great but one glaring issue is the face and head proportions on some of the characters like mai and the principle are jacked up and i cant stop staring at them. id love to see the faces and heads get tweaked. otherwise the story and fetishes on display are quite appealing!
while a browser based game is interesting, is there a reason it cannot be downloaded and played locally?
also checked it the first time and theres a log in reward system, what is this a gacha? im very confused, it unfocused if its not a gacha game or online game. if it is a gacha i fear you may be biting off more than you can chew?
in positive news im managing to play like a menace and immediately passed out the second i left arane's house during the first night dinner.
well no one is asking for your game, especially your first game to be perfect thats why were giving you pointers on things that are lacking or off.
slime girl is a major girl? well that makes my day! aspasia is number 1, ashley is number 2 and celica number 3!
oh traditional alchemy? thats interesting ill have to look more into that. kabbal is like that alchemical tree and sephira no?
yes it is your first game and so far its great, honestly so far the lack of character interaction was my only complaint and hearing it'll be alleviated is great!
so that explains the error. for the mean time you could just remove the red streak in her hair and itll match alot better, shouldnt take more than 30 seconds? could be a good stop gap until you're able to recomission it.
i suppose cluttered and difficult to parse works for deep dense woods. fair enough, i suppose i also never took the time to really look at it deeply. i mean ai is advanced. it could be useful for the more general background such as woods or lakes? im not saying you wouldnt likely get a bunch of flak or something for daring use ai but its always an option if one that comes with significant draw backs.
holidays has so far been good. hope your holidays have been good!.
dont force yourself to reply to each of my messages i have nothing but time and unlike you im not working on a game.
thanks for answering some of my questions!
no no it was christmas so take all the time you need! though i have some questions about the world and some light criticisms to share, nothing too bad i promise.
for the first question is aspasia the slime girl a main heroine? like will she get an ending? i immediatly singled her out as favorite waifu.
with the world, the magic is seperated into dense/subtle, immobile/mobile, and sharp/blunt if i recall. but that doesnt seem to make sense in a few ways.
water i assume wouble be subtle-mobile-sharp
air would be subtle-mobile-blunt or sharp
earth would be -dense-immobile-blunt
and fire would be subtle mobile-sharp
most seem mobile or sharp or some combination, it seems only earth is immobile so it seems strange to have an entirely label for solely earth, am i misunderstandign something here?
for my criticisms, ill say im at badon and im shopping with ashley. but ive noticed now that im out of the prologue suddenly its very one on one, i dont really see the characters interact all that much and it seems alot less energetic and fun. im enjoying spending time with and seeing each girl's story but not seeing interact with each other or as a large group has been a bit saddening. does this change later on or are their plans for more group content?
my second criticism is directly relating to one of sarah's CG. her boobjob CG has a red streak in her hair and doesnt really resemble sarah all that much if at all, it looks more like a Azur lane character.
toward the background statement i think they serve their purpose reasonable well but some of the backgrounds like the deepwoods background can be rather difficult to parse and understand, its a very messy background with no real center or core to focus on,
still loving the game!
decided to check this out because screw it im bored and what can i say? absolutely blown away. im at the very start having just gotten back to the village. but the characters are all unique and distinct.
for one this story is actually good? most types of these games i skip through because its porn i just want get off. but while i initially had no real interest i was won over quite quickly. The vocabulary is suprisingly good, with words like servitor being used which is a very seldom used word.
The humor while excessive in some places is by no means bad, it's gotten audible laughter out of me and regularly gets chuckles.
the intereactions are wonderful too, you very regularly get to make choices that at least change a few lines and helps with player agency. seeing the different characters react and interact with one another is a real joy.
the art is unexpected. i half expect more ai art but while i wouldnt say this art competes with professional studios its certainly up there in terms of itch in general.
the content as of now is qite nice from the word count provided. too many times a game is released with about 10 minutes of content and it takes upward of a year to be even worth a damn.
this is turning into a review but no matter. the gameplay i...dont really know i cheated i just am very much hesitant to play too many turn based games.
as a final aside i will simply state the game is certifiably one of the better ones ive seen on Itch, Initially impressions id rank it near monster girl dreams or maybe kings fall.
the author said this was their first game and GOD DAMN did they knock it out of the park! Full steam ahead Cry this is top tier!
wow im impressed. several moments have made me laugh. first the initial assault with for me steve the electrician. but pretty much anything to do with the protag as hes basically a non genre savvy deadpool which is a colossal compliment. the girls are super interesting and fun.
the animated scenes are unexpected and humorous.
id say my only complaint thus far is we turned down a jelly girl waifu. but at least we got a blue skinned alien waifu in exchange.
the adding of a new floor that has a lounge area would open the idea for other rooms like an arcade or something. but yea the phone idea sounds like a great idea, maybe have nudes sent to you be available as wall papers?
all these ideas seem like they require significant reworks to the game through and through however 1 would be tough enough as is let alone all of them. would implementing all these even be a feasible enough idea? i love thinking outside the box, but spending time brainstorming ideas for something that wouldnt work regardless doesnt seem fruitful
I discovered the entity is male apparently and its unfortunate I'm straight XD but I'm glad they're romancable for those inclined! Some people throw a fit at inclusivity options but I'm fully a cis straight male in the game and the options for those dont affect me in anyway.
Good on you for letting anyone be who they want to be in this!
You're lucky you're a kick ass dude chang or i'd be mighty weirded out you popped up out of eternum...but knowing his character and how he shows up everywhere...it kinda makes sense.
so uhh that cute pink haired girl in the back ground occasionally is gonna show up right? Not just some background character right?...right.
I've kept away for awhile, since 0.2 in favor of getting 0.4 which would be around double the content.
just 1 or 2 questions
1. will this game have routes? like in standard Japanese's Visual novels, will the girl's have their own dedicated ends?
2. Eva pops up and then just vanishes, Is she a main character or a one off? id love to see more of her. Her design and character is fascinating.
edit: just saw eva is the face of the other's section, damn, either way hope to see more of her.
If you answer these questions much obliged, fantastic game as usual!