I really loved this VN! I actually clicked on it because it had a black lady on the display image (I'm black myself). I love the text and descriptions, the emotions and the kink--it was all very good!
And, since you asked for constructive criticism: I got a little confused by the narration perspective at the beginning. It might be helpful to have the girls use each other's names a little bit more in the beginning, to more firmly cement the narrative perspective, so I know who's holding whom and who's tightening their grip on whom.
Also, I REALLY liked that I could play it in-browser, without having to download it!
I really enjoyed this. I kinda wish we ever found out what's Ella's deal, but even without that, I really loved it. It's quiet, poignant and just very beautiful. I got ending 3 first because I'm a monsterlover, lol.
A friend recommended this game to me, and I was specifically interested in the twine version, though I did read the PDF versions first, and thought they spoiled me for the twine version, but they SUPER didn't, and the twine version is so good, I have played every route, clicked every link, I want to eat your words, they are so good, this is literally everything I have ever wanted to see exist in the world, like you? YOU GET IT.
I just played this game and it made me saaaaaaaaaaaaad! (It's very good and was very fun and I liked it a lot, but also, we didn't use our anomalies like we should have.)
Gosh, this is LOVELY! I love how flustered the boys got when you flirt with them and the way the music STOPS when Elias shows up? Delightful. All of your characters are delightful, Tim is a wonderful guide and a lovely troll, and I like how Elias doesn't take a no for an answer, he's SUCH a creep, I love him!
