is it still in the main game?
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no no. i was referring to the single monster which you can choose to fight at the end of the demo. the second stage with the blades coming from both sides was too hard for me and i was wondering weather anyone else had managed to beat him considering it's optional. i never met whatever you're referring to. great game btw. much love from europe and thank you for the replies
downright AWESOME. just wow. i'm glad you're managing to pursue this passion of yours and aren't afraid to let us know how demanding this is of you.
to be honest i think your blandly handsome new portraits give the visual novel a more typical, basic look which might have put me off but i'm in AWE at the dedication and talent that must have gone into all those drawings and now even animations, not to mention the writing. in fact, it looks so highly produced that it doesn't look indie any more. it's hard to believe it's just one person behind it all.
i'm drawn to obscure games so i'm glad i found dark nights in its rawer state which gave off less of a commercial vibe, so i decided to check it out, however i'm a guy so probably not your target audience.
btw i can proofread for you for free. i'm noticing an occasional poor choice of words. for example i'm playing right now and kaichi tells miyoko that cursed people willingly give up their lives because "they can't stand demons bothering them". "bothering" implies mild annoyance. it would be more suited to say "they can't face being tormented by the demons", or "they can't tackle the haunting, dreadful ever-present awareness that a demon might assail them at any moment".
this is occasional and not a big deal but since you're proofreading anyway, if you think i can save you some time do let me know.
what's a beauty content creator? i don't mean to life-coach anyone but i wonder if you can carve away some time to flesh out an idea if inspiration strikes even while doing keeping your job. i can only assume this is how it goes for most independent developers at least in the beginning. anyway thanks for the reply
loved the game.
there are a few kinks to even out in the english writing that your proofreader has missed. if the game hasn't been abandoned, i can correct the few grammatical mistakes and improper choices of words that are left for free. just reply to my comment if you're interested.
other than that and the fact that it's incomplete, it's perfect. i hope it's continued. thanks for the demo.