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I hope you enjoyed my review, sorry if i'm unhinged. i am very unwell o7

This is truly a unique and interesting experience, you managed to pack quite a lot in just a few minutes of playtime! I enjoyed it very much 😁 and love the  symbolism behind the page design <3 stupid rat 

Thank you! The art was experimental but I'm glad it worked out well :D

Thank you!

The writing is absolutely beautiful, even reading it makes me emotional! I hope the daffodils bloom beautifully and the wedding goes well like Berny wished... amazing work!

Oohhh this is a very interesting story! I like the relationship between the two characters, and the bad ending is... oh man, I feel really bad for both of them. I'm very intrigued to learn more about the worldbuilding here, seems like there's a lot going on! I can't help but wonder what happened in the cult before this...

Just a little thing, I skipped a dialogue and noticed there's no back button so I opened the history screen and the text there is hardly visible, but other than that I have no other complaints! Great entry!

I foolishly thought that being nice is always the right option in games, and boy oh boy ending 3 caught me by surprise! Well, I guess that ending is what the MC wanted the most haha! This is very well-made, great pacing and beautiful art (the stepmother is very pretty...) and i love the spooky and tense atmosphere. Great work!

Oh wow, the ending where the MC choose to not pass caught me by surprise! This is a very interesting story and the art is gorgeous, awesome entry!!

I know there's literally the word 'lonely' in the title but gosh i didn't expect this to feel THAT lonely... the struggle of being attached to a friend you cherished clashing with the uncomfortable feeling of fighting with them and all the built-up frustration... everything is portrayed very well! The art is very pretty too, I really like Isley's design <3 I'm very intrigued to learn more about this world now! Amazing work!

This is a fun introduction to a bigger story, I'm excited to see where this goes! Great entry!

Ohh the art in this game is absolutely stunning! The character design and the stylish background is just *chef's kiss*! I really like how the atmosphere is very creepy at the start but the leafling turned out to be nice and everything turned brighter, really nice presentation! I'd love to see her again :D amazing entry!

This was such a delight to read! Lottie is very sweet and she's very much like me, I love reading my friends' works and sometimes I remember too much details and got a little bit too excited about it haha!
The art is very lovely, I love zooming in and finding small references on it! I might have jumped a little bit when doremi was mentioned because I absolutely LOVE doremi growing up <3 The contrast between the MC's personality and Lottie is really cute too, I'd love to see them interact again :D really awesome entry, I love this a lot!

Cute artstyle and interesting story, i love it a lot!

What a fun experience! The character design and the animation is very lovely, seems like an interesting world building too! I like how amaranth remembered if the player has reached an ending, this game made me realize how bad at tic tac toe i am LOL amazing work, love it!!

I absolutely adore this, the main character is very relatable and their awkwardness is really cute hehe the incubus is cute too! I really like how you write the mc's curiosity and confusion, the ending is really nice too! Plus i love the bonus sketch <3 the presentation is very nice, you did a great job with the GUI! Really amazing work!!

This is a cool entry, the animation makes it so much more lively! Like Andrea, i was afraid i'd make a wrong move and get a band end, but thankfully it turns out okay :D i love this, great work!

Oh wow, what an amazing way to potray the theme! Even someone who's very devoted to their religion can question their belief, i really like this topic! I really love how it's delivered too, very chilling! Amazing work!

Oh.... oh i didn't expect it to hit me THAT hard, i'm actually tearing up :") really loved the atmosphere, and the sounds fit in so nicely! The writing is beautiful, I want to give the main character a hug <3 what a meaningful experience, I love this a lot!

Thank you so much! :D

Thanks a lot! ^^

Thanks a lot chaiya! <3

Proud to say i got the good ending first try, woohoo!! This was fun to play! :D

I got chills when the game ended abruptly in the end omg, curse you freaky boy...!

The visuals are amazing as always! And for a short story i think it's pretty interesting! I hope we'll see him again in future projects!! Great work! :D

I said "NOOOOO!!!" out loud when I realized what happened in the end, I've never been so upset at seeing a skip button glow instead of being muted :"< this is so well written, it's amazing how much impact you can make with all the limitations of the jam! Absolutely amazing work!! <3

10/10 experience from playing as an isopod alone, i love isopods <3 the battles and puzzles are simple but it's fun, love the sea creatures! Great game!

This game was such a delight to play, really great humor and fun mechanics too! The puzzles are fun and the voice acting really adds a lot to the game, great work!

Hello! I hope you're ready to read a wall of text because OH MY GOSHHH THIS GAAAAAME I LOVE ITTT

I love stories that center around character interactions and this VN really delivers! I'm proud to say I got the good end first try woooo! I'll get back to this later to get the other endings but I want to get my thoughts out first :D

First of all, Aku is such a sweetheart hehe I love seeing his development as the story goes! You go little errand boy, go get those friendships <3

I've always had a bias towards Sera (I'm weak to women with customer service smiles who can crush me but would never...) and aduh sayang budak korporat pasti capek kerja banting tulang sehari-hari ya here I'll save you from corporate hell hehe jk <3 she's so awesome for maintaining her nice demeanor and being professional at all times tbh, I can only dream of being as cool as her--

Barra is such a fun guy! He's so me but with chocolate instead of cheese oops-- I was surprised to see his other form, oh he's so pretty <3 like boy who allowed you to be so chill AND pretty?? The ideal job is if every coworker is like him fr (...not ideal for the cheese situation tho, i take it back. Still love him tho!)

And ohhh boy Salma is SOOO COOL??? She's very intimidating and like Aku I was scared of her but at the same time I really really really want to know more about her, she's a very interesting character! The picnic preparation part was really fun to read, it's nice to see her softer side hehe. When she was about to teach Aku the 'superior' f word I was like YEAHHHH LET HIM SAY IT oh I love her so much!

The art is gorgeous and the writing is really nice, their contrast personalities make a very fun dynamics! The subtle mystery elements really got me hooked too, I hope in the future we can see what the heck is happening behind the curtains of Y/N :0
And oh my god ADA INDO COYYYYY! I love how you always incorporate culture in your games, it makes it so interesting to read! Onde-onde my beloved <3

There's a very small issue when I want to change pages on the save screen, when I try to click on the numbers it clicks the save slot instead, I had to hover my mouse a little lower to click the pages. This might just be an issue with my device, but I thought I'll let you know! I can still save just fine :D other than that, everything is smooth!

Sorry for this wall of text I hope you guys aren't too tired of reading my essay oops-

Great job on finishing this game, it was so fun to play! I look forward to see more of them, I love the Y/N bar crew so much!! <3

Cute characters and cute art!! <3

I'm sorry for this sorta long review but this little game was a really fun experience! The art is adorable and the story is nice :D

I started with Talia's route and thought it was cute, was very curious about other choices but the browser won't let me reset my progress. I had to go go incognito and restart the browser every few times but it was worth it! The puns in Zale's route was so funny, and Ellie was adorable! Though, I love Aphros' route the most. I'm glad the cat can find their new home in the sea <3 Great game!

Thank you so much! <3

This is such a beautiful depiction of whalefall, the art is really pretty! Amazing job!

This was a fun read! Albert and gideon are so sweet <3 the story is nice and art is lovely, i really dig their design! Would love to see more of them, especially louis and rei they're really cute hehe :D

Short but pretty fun! I expected that bad ending but i can't help but give it a try hahaha

This was a fun read! Sini kuroki, biar aku yang kasih kamu THR :D I'd love to see more of these three!

Thank you for playing <3

Thank you for playing! I put this project on hold but hopefully I'll get back to writing it again soon :D

Thank you for playing! :D

Oh noooo the pressure...! Now i'm never gonna be able to finish the CG...! (falls dramatically)

Hehe i'll finish it as soon as i can! Thank you for your support :D <3

Thank you! I identify as gray-aro so I'm happy you can relate to my characters :D

I need whatever you ate to be this funny omg i might have laughed too much... i love everything about this! The silly meta interactions made me laugh multiple times HAHAHAHA didn't expect hon and honami would bicker so much!

I immediately lost it when the classic RPGM music plays and it just gets worse help 😭 broccoli hon best hon btw /j Love the part when honami said i love you to hiro, he got all flustered then they immediately went "yeah not canon btw" like aw poor guy! I like the voice acting bit too, very cute <3

And boy oh boy that ending hit me like a truck man i wasn't prepared for that 😭 now i'm also conscious about my life... This was a really fun experience, great job!!

This was interesting! I was a little confused but i figured the mechanics out pretty quickly. Love how diverse the characters are with the pronouns and titles, English isn't my first language so I didn't know there are so many royal titles other than prince and princess :0 love this game!