Aww, this is really cute! Im glad i finally got to read the rest of it after the preview some time ago. Wonderful!
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For those of you here with my same problem: unfinished drafts of act 2 and 3 exist, but only in the unofficial lancer discord server "Pilot Net", which has them pinned in a chat about spoilers for the campaign. Personally I'll feel better running the other acts with even a little guidance, there are a lot of moving parts here (in the best way)
Wow, thank you! I haven't had time to write more on this for quite a while, but I do want to get back to it eventually! I have to say, I can't take credit for the way I used the gender-neutral terms during the swap - if you like that kind of thing, you should definitely check out Alex Zandra's work, which I drew a lot of inspiration from here. But, I'm very glad you liked it!
This was amazing! You did a great job of making the main character worry about being trans, worry about coming out, enjoying her new body, putting in just the right amount of detail about cyborgs and technology to explain the ideas without getting too bogged down in specifics... it was very good. You nailed the cis reactions, too, I think. Top notch!