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Hello again Ponydragon, thanks for your feedback. I'm not sure what do you mean by the reroll part -- the mechanical effect is to make the success margin greater, the narrative outcomes in TTRPGS are generally decided by the players. There is some help of the narrative implications in the middle of the manual, but that's admittedly very short due to my self imposed limit of pages. To quote a specific part:

"Lucky you for having the power to return
from dead, remember that it takes you to the last test you failed (the one leading to your assassination). You can choose to repeat that action taking advantage of your new acquired knowledge or start a new chain of events."

 it's not my intend to give players a story as in a module, but a ruleset and guideline to build a narrative -- as traditional in manuals of tabletop rpgs played solo.

Thanks again for your time, even if you didn't play the game -- reading the guide is already much appreciated. I'll try to apply your advices best I can.

Hi Ponydragon, sorry for the lateness of my reply. I haven't been on itch.io for sometime. I'm writing you thank you for your feedback, but I'm not sure I can change much based on your reply. Again, I'm very thankful that you gave me the time trying the RPG, but it seems to me that to apply much of your suggestions would be to actually not make it a solo tabletop RPG, but more of a common boardgame -- I believe this is your first time trying something of the genre? Sadly there's not much in the booklet to introduce about solo tabletop RPGs, although that would certainly make it more accessible, it also would make it much longer.

Nonetheless I'm very thankful for your comment, I'm sorry it wasn't much of your liking.

First, yes I want a feedback on Feedback (the RPG). Which also means I probably passed the quota of the word feedback on a single post already, sorry for that...

But back on track, I released a Solo RPG called Feedback RPG. Which was originally written in Portuguese and now available in English, it would be lovely to have some boardgames aficionados to give it a try and share how was the experience (and also look for any errors that made into the translation). It's very easy to learn, free to play and released under creative commons. Please do share any criticism, ideas or questions you may have. Some comment on how difficult is to understand the rules and if the gameplay is naturally flowing would be awesome, leaving a message on the Itch.io page would also mean a lot for me.

Link to the project: https://rickterto.itch.io/feedback-rpg-en
If you want to give feedback on the Portuguese Version: https://rickterto.itch.io/feedback-rpg

Hey there, have some time to spare? I would like to showcase my horror RPG, a solo boardgame where death is constantly at the corner waiting for a single mistake to take you. Luckily you have the ability to go back in time to try to change your destiny, can you end this nightmare or will you finally succumb? Only one way to find out, play Feedback RPG right now: is simple, easy to learn and free!

Download Feedback RPG

Joguei com os meus amigos, me diverti bastante. Super fácil de aprender e sem necessidade de preparo -- todos pegaram o jeito bem rápido e gostaram muito.