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this looks great! Would it be possible for you to upload this on DTRPG with their print on demand card system? It would be awesome to have this in print.

I definitely want a PDF.

Are there plans for a character sheet?

Thanks! Kowloon Walled City was a fascinating place. There's a great book "City of Darkness Revisted" worth reading if you can acquire a copy. 

I can do an alternate version with the panels in left to right order for PDF reading. That's a good idea!

I like this adventure. Excellent premise and mechanics. Stacking shifts might make middle/later encounters a bit bogged down. There are 10 regions and with the shift stabilizer, players can get a lot of shifts fairly quickly. The text is a bit dense - hard to squeeze all of that in a pamphlet, I know, so I'm not sure what the solution is. Is the stabilizer just a joke/trap for players? 

Oh and I wanted to have some kind of puzzle for the adventure, so I added the clues and the scientist so players have something to figure out. Obviously it's easy to modify how to shut off the machine.

Thanks for the critique! Proofreading is the first casualty of solo writing projects. I'll fix that and re-upload it when I get a chance.

Thanks! I didn't think of the attack system until after I ran the playtest lol

Cool concept, but can't beat it because gun doesn't work reliably in the final level. Can you set an option to disable the thing chasing us if we die like 3 times or something like that.