uh, yes! that sounds great too! waiting patiently then
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Thought I'd pitch in my two cents. I'm a fan of La Musa (still hoping that gets some work done on it soon) and was looking forward to this.
For a demo, it's not the worst thing ever. The art is nice, and I can see the vision but it definitely needs some work. Yeah the pacing is very, VERY fast between locations and just the way the characters interact with one another. They jump from topic to topic like it's nothing, and that's just not the way actual conversations flow. Obviously the broken rib thing, and the white werewolf (his attitude and introduction to the story leave a lot to be desired) would be some of my biggest concerns. Can't remember his name but the big blue wolf is cute, love to see some fat men love interests.
The personalities of all characters are just not there, and seem very rushed and cookie cutter to be memorable. This is just personal opinion obviously but the MC's design, I'm just not a fan of at all. Not gonna get into the whole twink gets romance simmed by different big bara guys that seems to be the trend though.
Ultimately, I can see that a lot of work into it and I know they are rewriting since people have been trashing on them. Wanna say good luck and good health to the producers, I know making a vn is not easy or quick. Just take your time and try to come out with the best work you can, the groundwork is there just needs polish.
Also if you wanted an English proofreader, I'd be happy to help free of charge lol. Some of the spelling and general grammar errors don't help alleviate some of the other issues
I....need more Matt content.......Good game overall though like I said I need more Matt....I choose Jack in the beginning but halfway through Matt's personality was infectious. Not so happy with what happened on their date, but the reasoning was explained and issue resolved so ill take it for now. Looking forward to more (more Matt)
I get that, but then later [spoiler] Valos says that he's had feelings for MC since they met basically, and if anything it was just a personal opinion that regardless of whether or not it's the social norm for them I personally wasn't gonna fall head over heels for him if he couldn't try to express those feelings for me first over the other dragon he's found[/spoiler]. I'm not ragging on the game or anything, I quite like the characters and world building, I was just noting the one actual complaint I did have about it so far
Ok so finished the latest version, I need some more Brym like now! I'm happy they were able to work through their issues. I noticed that the option to hang out with him on earlier days hasn't been implemented yet, it would be nice to have them resolve this stuff a little earlier on and develop into an actual boyfriend situation. While Garreth is hot and his attitude is infectious, I really am liking Brym way more in terms of character and design. Hoping to see more soon, keep up the good work and good health!
Hell, even a kiss or hand holding scene with Valos would be good to have before we see [spoiler] the other dragon giving him sloppy[/spoiler]. I'm not gonna have hardcore romantic feelings for this dragon when hes getting it on with other dudes, before we even had a chance to talk to him about it. The hot springs scene would have been a perfect time to even get in a quick kiss or just talk about feelings before that
I did like what has been released so far, but why did the [spoiler] other dragon get a scene with Valos before the MC did?[/spoiler] Feels a little like a slap in the face not gonna lie. But it's still a cute story, and i'm happy the MC isn't a complete pushover, that's always nice. Looking forward to more!
Okay gotta say, I absolutely loved this. The plot moved in a very interesting direction, one I was not expecting but was welcome. Really sets it apart from just being a dating sim. I've completely fallen for Tai, something about that Tiger! Day 15 broke me honestly, and I had a very, very, VERY strongly worded essay planned in my head if day 16 ended the way I thought it was going to. But I ended up cheering and pounding my fist with what happened, so properly executed I couldn't help but cry ;~; I'm also a fan of just how much time we get with Tai, it feels like a lot of VNs i've played say its over the course of a month or so, but will skip days here and there. Each of Tai's days had such a large amount of content that it made it worthwhile to stay through to is there so far. Speaking of, the "to be continued" means we are getting more of Tai's route i'm assuming? I need me some more of that Tiger!
Great game so far, I enjoy the character design and how even the side characters you don't get a route with are still developed, breathing characters of their own. Happily looking forward to more, and when I get paid again best bet i'm subbing! Best luck and health!
Ps: I know he's straight? and kind of scumy , but Maxwell? That dragon design is *chefs kiss*, sexy as hell! Still #teamtai though xD
True, that is one aspect I really enjoyed about Parker. While he definitely having some feelings, his love really seems to be true (not that the others don't), but he so incredibly sincere that it makes me fall for him more! He was also the one to tease Walter, outright requesting that he do something, which goes to show how conflicted he is with his feelings. I also really liked when he gets drunk and immediately starts regretting shooting Walter down and not just being upfront about how he feels. Another piece of fantastic character development! Im honestly a bit traumatized from Juuichi from Morenatstu, whats with these bears and being so secretive about their feelings?! Also Gil doesn't seem to care that Walter is his student xD, go ahead Parker take the plunge!!
I've finished Parker and Gil's routes, working on Lars currently, and gotta say i'm loving this game. The characters are all very well written, and the whole mystery plot going on is interesting as well. Its going to make me go and play the other routes I wasn't too interested in (Mark and Anders) just to get more of the story, I like how the plot is being slowly revealed over other characters routes. If there is one thing I have a complaint about it......
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Why didn't we get to kiss Parker!!!!! Big Kitty just had to butt in at the exact moment *cries*. There was the bed scene and all, but he looked so cute going in for a kiss, when the bears in VNs blush it tugs at my heartstrings. Not to mention we got to full on makeout with Gil too, but couldn't even get a smooch from Parker! But I know routes are still being completed, so I'll wait patiently for the day we can get a full kiss from Parker, and more >.>
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All in all, a very good game and i'm looking forward to seeing the rest of it. Fantastic work! Gonna go replay Parker's route and finish up Lars!