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I'm loving this comic, and the possible story to go with it? I kinda want to see the weird with this one LOL

So, 

I am loving this VN, The characters (with the exception of Mark....) The character development is interesting to say the least, and the pacing seems... Sporadic. I would have to say that the Art is my favorite part thus far.

I do however have a few problems: the pacing is sporadic. There is a lot of Fluff that is thrown in the writing that is arduous to get through at best (i.e: "I should probably get the lights!", "Don't forget to turn the lights out!", etc. Etc.) The fluff is very much so a thing. It feels as though the writing process was put to a halt and to fill blank space there was just more... Blank space to fill it. It all seems a bit forced and makes certain parts just really boring. 

The awkward is strong in this, I get some people are really awkward but not everyone should be awkward. You have different personalities that all kind of blend together when you incorporate awkward. At times I wasn't sure who I was talking to because their responses were just awkward. 

I do expect a lot from this VN though, it has a ton of potential, and even more so has the potential to just have great direction. Given some editing and removal of fluff this would quickly become a favorite but until then this is all very clunky and awkward. 

Thanks! :D Wasn't sure what was going on, I really love this VN, and was hoping more would come from it, I understand that life kinda... throws a wrench in things though, but it's good to hear that it's still going through :D

Did this project get ditched? Did I miss the memo or....